| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 20 Nov 2007 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: peleme (Anonymous)
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Ha my name is Perri too it's spelled funny tho. I enjoy your stories very much. Thank You for posting them.
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 19 Nov 2007 5:25 pm
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| Reviewer: lily (Anonymous)
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Awww. Harry is so cute. I like the cheekiness in the end. They are really getting into the father son roles now. Good chapter.
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 18 Nov 2007 9:45 am
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| Reviewer: LovelyLena (Anonymous)
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Oh, wonderful chapter! It's got to be one of my favorites so far.
Snape's reaction could not have been more perfect. It was just the right balance of anger and concern. And I think Snape really knows how to get through to Harry now and make him understand why Snape sets rules and expects him to follow them. Great job with that scene.
The spanking was amusing. I liked how Snape couldn't take anymore of Harry tossing and turning and decided to punish him then just so he could sleep. And I laughed when Harry said 'You're so cruel'. Why does he insist on insulting Snape when he's in trouble? Fortunately for him, Snape didn't seem to notice this time.
The next morning had to be one of my favorite scenes in the entire fic. I love the way you write cheeky!Harry. At least Snape got back at him by making the water cold. XD And Harry told Snape about the DA meetings, so it looks like he's finally learned to tell the truth. About time. Snape must be really frustrated with his lying.
You left it off well. I'm curious about the next chapter, but it's not a huge cliff hanger (did I mention that you're killing us with those?). It sounds like there is going to be some conflict between Harry and Draco. I hope Harry and Worty don't get into trouble. Draco on the other hand...well, he could use some good punishment.
Thank you so much for all of the recent updates! I love it. Can't wait to read more in "A Time and Place to Learn" and "The House Which Time Forgot". =)
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 18 Nov 2007 2:03 am
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| Reviewer: Caramello (Signed)
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Haha. That name -- Worty. It gets me each time, haha. I love Harry's flippancy, it's too perfect, not to mention fun seeing Snape get riled up like that, lol.
Looking forward to more!
I loved it. I knew he was going to get busted for lying. Poor Harry...having to wait for his spanking. I'm glad Snape came to his senses, though, and realized that Harry wouldn't be able to sleep thinking about the morning.
Harry's cheekiness really cracked me up in this chapter. Some particular favorites:
"You're so cruel."
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"Right, then, I'm off. Thank you for your lovely hospitality, hairbrush excluded."
It's funny, because you'd expect him to be all humble and quiet and subdued after a punishment, but he's quite cheerful...probably because he isn't weighed down by guilt anymore.
Anyway, I love your characterization of Harry...OH!...and I also loved the part where Snape covered Harry with a blanket and noticed that he was shaking. I'm anxious to see where this story goes. Keep writing!...I'm loving these frequent updates of both of your stories :) Suppose that means I need to get crackin' on my own story...lol.
Thanks for the great update!
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 17 Nov 2007 11:22 pm
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| Reviewer: ddamato (Signed)
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Great chapter, I freaking love it!
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 17 Nov 2007 8:21 pm
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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A haribrush, poor Harry? Well, I mean it's bad that Harry lied, but isn't that a bit too much... well this is Snape we are talking about, so I guess this makes sense, much lighter than your other story, though I like that one too...
I hope Worty is okay, well great fic and am impatiently waiting to read more! Thank you for the fast update!
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 17 Nov 2007 4:18 pm
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| Reviewer: mnfm (Signed)
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This is my first review in this site & I'm glad is for you. Your stories are great & I like them a lot.
(Regarding the "The House that time...", please write it as you see fit. You are the author.-- Its very good! I like mean Snape too!
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 17 Nov 2007 8:57 am
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| Reviewer: curlybean (Signed)
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Great chapter. Poor Harry, having to face Snape so soon after his little adventure with Moretta. I would be trembling, too. And then, Snape makes him wait for his punishment? Definitely cruel in a loving kind of way. I know Snape wanted Harry to calm down before he punished him, but he should have known that having to wait for his punishment would only rile Harry up more.
I loved how cheeky Harry was the next morning. Too funny. Snape is completely at a loss as to how to deal with that cheekiness. Even funnier.
Still can't wait to truly understand what exactly Snape and Moretta are on about. And can't wait for Harry/Draco interaction as well as more Harry/Snape.
Thanks so much for the update. Take care....
| Title: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons
| 17 Nov 2007 7:52 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Whooo! Great chapter! I'm so relieved that Snape knew what was going on, and that everything was okay in the end. :) Harry is such a cheeky little brat! Woah! Amazing what he dares! I love him. Great work with such interesting characterizations. Snape is in character of course, and I love how he made the water cold while Harry was in the shower! Ha! I really like Worty as a character and I can't wait to see what Draco's up to! The only thing that seemed off was that Harry fell asleep so quickly after his punishment. I'd of thought that he would be too uncomfortable at first and have to calm down just a bit more before he could fall asleep, enough time for the adrenaline to wear off or something. Thanks for the fantastic update!
(There were a couple of typos and missing words, but I'm not complaining because i'd rather have quick updates than perfect chapters!)
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