| Title: Chapter 4: License to Apparate
| 14 Apr 2023 11:58 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Snape’s so right that Harry isn’t an ordinary teenager and can’t expect to be treated as one. I wonder why they didn’t use poly juice (timed to wear off at the apparition testing center) or apparate to and from the testing center.
Great chapter! I liked seeing Harry’s maturity in thinking about what he heard in a different light.
| Title: Chapter 2: Said and Unsaid
| 10 Apr 2023 1:46 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m loving your brilliant story. There was much to chew on in this chapter.
| Title: Chapter 1: Number Twelve Grimmauld Place
| 10 Apr 2023 12:32 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love how you’ve set this sequel up!
Utterly beyond awesome!!! That goes for the story as a whole, which never failed to explore aspects of canon in an entirely new light -- you really make your audience re-see what we already knew, and you brought us along on an amazingly-detailed ride! I couldn't put this story down! Wow! Wow! Wowwweeee!!! 😁
Whoa! The moor cottage scene was INTENSE! I was dreading what might happen, how they could possibly get away... 😳 And how many MORE times Harry can actually escape relatively unscathed. Definitely has more lives than a cat!
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 18 Sep 2020 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Fantastic!! I had a rough patch in the middle of the story - not your fault but I absolutely *hate* any sort of betrayal or perceived betrayal in a story and this one had a *lot* of that - but once I skimmed through that part I *loved* the rest of the story. And I loved how you finished it off, too. You found away to step the story down into peace times and tie everything up without it feeling
like a letdown. And I loved the idea of Snape heading Auror training! It was perfect! Thanks so much for the lovely long read!
I read this story straight through, after reading the first one in your series, and I am simply blown away by your incredible story-telling ability! It never failed to amaze me when you took familiar details and put your own unique twist in them to create whole new scenarios! BEYOND EXCELLENT!!! Thank you so much! 💖
| Title: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings
| 20 Aug 2016 2:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Oriano (Signed)
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I spent the better part of two days reading this fanfic, and it was absolutely brilliant!
Thank you so much for creating this work, wherein I could lose myself. I loved Harry and Severus' growing relationship. I felt frustration with the ups and downs, with Harry and Severus' stubbornness, but I was cheering as all hell the whole time. I love how far they've come!
One of my favourite parts was getting to have a look at Severus' soul. It was magnificently written and I swear I cried on some occasions.
Also the hug at the end of the battle, when Harry found out that Snape was alive, had me cheering out loud (bet my family is thinking that I'm insane).
The epilogue was amazing. I love that a friendship developed between Remus and Severus. I'm still gushing over everything I swear lol.
Thank you so so much for writing this!!
The last part of this chapter was truly the highlight of my day. That! That was glorious! XD
I'm gonna send the last half of this chapter to someone just to see their reaction. :D
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