Not sure that I understood it all- but very complex and interesting. I enjoyed the way you bounced between time frames.
| Title: Defense Against Spiders
| 29 Apr 2007 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Great! Fantastic writing. Very dramatic, and confusing with the memories for Harry, which is just right for meshing the insanity of the cruciatus curse. whoo!
By the way, I edited the formatting of the chapter for you, taking the double line breaks out, and I moved the chapter notes to the story notes area as this is a one-shot.
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