| Title: Chapter 49 - The Forgotten Summer
| 29 Jun 2020 3:33 pm
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| Reviewer: thaimes (Signed)
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Oh, I loved this chapter. Dumbledore’s “come along, my boys” was such a nice line, and it made me giddy just reading it. I live for the Dumbledore/Snape/Harry interactions (and not least because you write them so well)!
I also really appreciate how you’re pacing out Harry coming out of the potion and transitioning into Hogwarts. The end of the Voldemort Arc is pretty significant, and you’re doing a great job of not rushing it. Is it too cheesy to say it feels just right? 😉
I also found it really interesting how Harry didn’t remember his time with Voldemort. It was a unique little twist that I didn’t expect, and made the last bit of this chapter all the more bittersweet :( Can’t say I’m not looking forward to Snape getting over himself and accepting his newfound role in Harry’s life.
With that said, I hope you enjoy your vacation! These are super stressful times we’re in, and just for writing alone I’d say you deserve it. Can’t wait until you’re back!
Author's Response: If it is too cheesy, then lay on the cheese, lol! Thank you so much for your kind words. I've really tried throughout this entire fic to not rush plot points, so it's nice to get that feedback when it's working. :) And I'm really not in the mood to drag things out more than they need to be, so don't worry too much about Snape staying away for long. ;)