I think Harry's "vent" got cut out somehow:
'Harry didn’t realize Snape wanted a response until a few seconds of silence had passed. He chewed his lip, not sure how to respond. He settled on, “Do you want me to condemn you?”
“Yes!” ground out Snape.
The professor stayed silent, letting him vent. Harry took a deep breath, thinking if there was anything else to add, but he thought that about covered it. He felt calmer with that off his chest, and he cocked his head. “How’s that? Do you feel better now that I yelled at you?”'
Is there a paragraph missing?
Anyhoo, I've been binge-reading for hours!
SNAAAAAAPE!!! NO, darn it!!!
Ha! That was such a surprise on learning "Crabbe's" true identity I had to read the whole chapter AGAIN to see how he was treating Harry!
Thank you so much for continuing this story. I have made it to this chapter in one go (I was hoping to read the entire fic tonight, but I realized it's going to take many hours longer), and I couldn't imagine it suddenly cutting off. It must have been hard for your original readers to think you'd abandoned it: I'm glad I don't have to wait 12 years for it to continue!
That said, thank you for your dedication in coming back after so long. It gives me hope some other seemingly abandoned takes will also be finished!
I haven't commented on any of the previous chapters in my greed to continue the story, but you get 10 chocolate frogs for each of them! Your writing is excellent and the story is gripping.
| Title: Epilogue/Bonus Chapter (AKA Dumbledore Is a Scheming Old Coot)
| 15 Feb 2023 1:05 am
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| Reviewer: Strawbbe (Signed)
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This is one of the sweetest and honestly most inspiring severitus stories ive ever read omg :(💖 i have a feeling this fic is gonna stick w me for a while, and whether you plan to write a sequel any time soon or not ill be here!! i appreciate this fic sm, ur a wonderful writer and this was one of the best characterizations of harry & snape ive seen . It was so heartwarming to see how their dynamic developed and while binge reading there were definitely more than a few moments where i had to take a second to punch the air and cheer or cry whjwgwka,,,, i cant thank you enough for this fic
| Title: Epilogue/Bonus Chapter (AKA Dumbledore Is a Scheming Old Coot)
| 29 Dec 2022 6:53 pm
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| Reviewer: lego_head (Signed)
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This story had me in tears more times than I care to admit.
Dear author, thank you for this truly magical experience. Your words gave me consolation. Your characters gave me hope. I appreciate you coming back and finishing this story because it deserved to be finished.
I wish you all the best in your life.
Thank you.
| Title: Epilogue/Bonus Chapter (AKA Dumbledore Is a Scheming Old Coot)
| 31 Mar 2022 4:06 am
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| Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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This is hands down one of the best fan fiction in this fandom…. You nailed the characters they felt very true to the canon … and you gave us such an amazing spin…
This will definitely be on my read again list!! And I can’t wait for the next installment
| Title: Epilogue/Bonus Chapter (AKA Dumbledore Is a Scheming Old Coot)
| 11 Feb 2022 10:08 am
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