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Title: Chapter 37 - Snake in the Grass 10 Feb 2020 7:29 am
Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot to ask if you plan a Snape pov for when Harry is under the influence of the potion?

    Author's Response: So I have thought multiple times about penning a Snape POV chapter, but Snape's mind is so different than Harry's that it hasn't felt right so far. It's always a possibility until each chapter has been posted, but for now expect it all in Harry's POV. 
Title: Chapter 37 - Snake in the Grass 09 Feb 2020 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness! What a cliffhanger. Poor Harry. I really enjoy your writing. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, I was a bit cruel with that cliffhanger, wasn't I? But some scenes you just can't end in any other way than a cliffie, you know? I do hope I am forgiven. ;) Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 37 - Snake in the Grass 09 Feb 2020 4:20 pm
Reviewer: thegorgonexperiment (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear god oh how I need next part right now... Your writing is - as always - great and I would read this story for hours at no end.

    Author's Response: I'm sorry you have to wait, but I hope you like what happens next! Thank you so much for the review - so sweet of you to say that!! :)
Title: Chapter 37 - Snake in the Grass 09 Feb 2020 1:39 am
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    So I love your story so much that I figured how to get beyond my AOL acct.
    And register here! Great chapter. Yes Harry , you should have let Hunter bite him.
    So Sad Now Harry's kidnapping and torture will come to fruition. And Snape is going to maybe eventually feel guilty over his departure.
    I sure hope this doesn't mean the end is drawing near. It looks like a lot of readers are invested in this relationship you have written.

    Author's Response:

    Yay!! And hi! Is this the same hobeson from ff.net? :) 

    Yes, Hunter totally should have bitten him! Maybe he still will... Although if it is actually Remus, then that wouldn't be good either, so...hmm. I have about two weeks (HP time, not our time) worth of story to tell before the end, but don't hold me to that, as I'm more focused on telling the story I want to tell than making sure it fits into a specific timeframe. So we're approaching the last parts of my story (sorry!) but never fear, there is still plenty story left to tell. Thank you for the review and I'm so so happy you're still enjoying the story!

Title: Chapter 37 - Snake in the Grass 08 Feb 2020 12:22 pm
Reviewer: Kyralian (Signed) [Report This]
    Imperious or something much, much worse? It's very comforting to know that come Saturday there will be a new chapter, but really! I don't know how I'll make it through the week now... And I work next Saturday so I won't be able to read until the afternoon... This is maddening.

    I admit I suspected something dodgy about Remus ever since he objected to the most secure safehouse. Harry should have wondered why Remus would leave the house during the night...

    Author's Response: Yeah, Harry could have put two and two together...but then, hindsight is 20/20. Here he is, completely distracted by his fallout with Snape, assured by the grownups that Remus is fine now (ugh, grownups!), and prone to trust and defend his friends from any suspicion. Poor kid not only dropped the ball, didn't even know there was a ball to drop. :( Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the latest development. Oh, and maybe you'll be able to read the next chapter before work, as I'll be posting much earlier in the day due to travel plans. I suppose it depends on time zone. I hope you enjoy it either way, and I'm sorry to keep you waiting!!
Title: Chapter 37 - Snake in the Grass 08 Feb 2020 10:02 am
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it! I kneeeeeeeeew something was off with Remus the moment he made those horrible suggestions for safe houses to go to. I've been waiting for this. I just wanna scream! Poor Harry. Well, Snape get over your hissy fit and get back to Harry!

    Author's Response: Eek, Remus, whatcha doin??? Ha. Yes, I do wish I could have been more subtle about that, but on the other hand, I'm glad that it didn't come completely out of the blue. Hopefully Snape can get his butt in gear soon, because Harry needs a rescuing hero!!
Title: Chapter 25 - The Gift 07 Feb 2020 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    At last they seem to be on the same page but not sure how long it will last. Thank you for your wonderful story

    Author's Response: Yes...they do seem to have their bumps, don't they? Thank you for the reviews! It's so fun to hear what you liked about each chapter. :)
Title: Chapter 24 - The Mental Arts 07 Feb 2020 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely to have Hermione in the story! Thank you so much

    Author's Response: She's so fun, I couldn't leave her out! I'm glad you like her inclusion. :)
Title: Chapter 23 - Resolve 07 Feb 2020 6:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, I’m so pleased Severus has another chance

    Author's Response: Everyone deserves another chance. Well...at least Snape does. ;)
Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2 07 Feb 2020 1:04 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved Harry’s stream of conscience and the interactions with Snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you!! That was fun to write. :)

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