| Title: Chapter 29 - The Problem with Grown-Ups
| 17 Dec 2019 4:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed)
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Just like I thought))) but I liked the conversation between Harry and Snape. It feels like they are finally talking about the elephant in the castle that was never addressed or even named in the original books. And I really like your Snape flavour)))
Author's Response: Yes, those two have quite a lot to talk about! I'm trying really hard to fit in all the things I want them to talk about without dragging down the plot. It's difficult to get pacing right when you're writing the story as you're posting it, but I'll just do the best I can. :) Thanks for the encouragement!
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 16 Dec 2019 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Kikimorra (Signed)
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I've been saving this up for a quiet moment to enjoy because stories take some focus to get back in after a break) and man was I rewarded))) loved the embarrassing truth that Snape saw, that was so juicy))) also, with an ending like this, I kinda suspect something terrible to happen in the next chapter. Congrats on NaNo, I did send you an invitation on the NaNo website, but it's way too confusing for my simple mind, so I ended up completely messing up my profile and goals, and the whole thing did nothing for my writing progress. Maybe next year I get someone to tutor me 😂
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you liked the chapter! I got a NaNo invite I assumed was you and accepted it. :) Yeah, I suppose October will be planning month next year, haha. To be honest, I don't use all of the tools or sections on the website, but I love how you can track your progress. I wish I could use that tracker all year long, ha! :) We should definitely do it again next year! NaNoWriMo 2020!!!
| Title: Chapter 6 - Voldemort's Plan
| 11 Dec 2019 8:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an informative chapter
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for reading it. :)
| Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears
| 11 Dec 2019 8:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter I could feel the claustrophobic atmosphere of the room, thank you
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :) I enjoyed writing that chapter.
| Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation
| 10 Dec 2019 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love the way they are annoying each other thank you so much
Author's Response: Isn't it great how entertaining it is watching two characters annoy each other? Lol.
| Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters
| 10 Dec 2019 9:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love their interaction very cannon like thank you
Author's Response: Their interactions are fun to write. I'm so glad you like it!
| Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience
| 09 Dec 2019 8:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I love how Harry is manipulating Petunia
Author's Response: He really could have done well in Slytherin, huh? ;)
| Title: Chapter 1 - Unexpected Visitor
| 09 Dec 2019 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved Harry in a temper with Severus. Excellent start to the story thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you're enjoying it. :)
| Title: Chapter 28 - Occlumency, Part 2
| 07 Dec 2019 5:57 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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A glorious story and soooo thankful you have taken it up again. Harry and Snape's quirks about each other are fun to ponder over, and I adore the Occulmency lessons; more of them , please.
Hm, you made me laugh at Harry's determination to wrap Snape more into his life - his mood-reading works.
Eh, Sn-scrooge, your loneliness is being erased-swindled by a 'canny' teen.
Good, he needs to be needed, our Snape of the scratchy wool and lilac and herb scent.
Could you keep writing for a long time? That is my Christmas wish.
Lovely Seasons Greetings to you.
Author's Response: Haha I love the image invoked by Scroogy Snape being swindled into relinquising his loneliness by a canny teen. Made my day. :) And yes, he totally needs to be needed! Thank you so much for reading! I will be happy to fulfill your Christmas wish. :) Seasons Greetings to you as well!!
This is such a great story, it made me stay up late when finishing it. Your characterisation is spot of in my opinion. I'm really glad you decided to come back and finish it.
Author's Response: I'm sorry to have been the cause of missed sleep, but I'm glad you liked the story enough to stay up. :) Thanks for the review! Sorry it took a bit for me to respond - but I'm back in the swing of things now! :)
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