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Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies 13 Oct 2019 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the scene with Poppy especially when she told off Severus. Thank you

    Author's Response: Poppy is a hoot, isn't she? I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Title: Chapter 8 - Of Wizards and Muggles 12 Oct 2019 10:09 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter I could see it all playing out
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 12 Oct 2019 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good juxtaposition between the happiness at the beginning of the chapter and the end thank you

    Author's Response: Ooh I love it when people use big words to describe my writing. It makes me feel like an honest-to-goodness writer. ;)
Title: Chapter 6 - Voldemort's Plan 12 Oct 2019 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent chapter
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 12 Oct 2019 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation 12 Oct 2019 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus being his usual blinkered self! Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: Haha yes - he is, isn't he? :) Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 25 - The Gift 10 Oct 2019 6:51 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, again
    I couldn't find out how to answer your kind response to my review of the next chapter. so I write it here. -I dance around joyfully, when a Real author writes back to me,- hrm....well, I mean yes, where was I?-
    'Opus Harry P'.is Latin: opus - the whole work or series of Harry Potter.
    Still enjoying reading this story again and again. Severus is so formal, proud and awkward, diffident in friendship; Not many have taken the chance on him , have they? Like a stiff crane spying into the water. Young Harry is carefully..eager. huggles..
    They really want to trust each other and you have caught that longing.

    Author's Response: Ah okay! I've been out of the fandom for so long that I thought maybe I was missing a well-known story or that it was a code word for something. But that makes sense :) And I dance around joyfully when a real reader leaves me feedback, so it's mutually beneficial, isn't it? :) :) haha - And I love your description of Snape. Spot on, lol!
Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 10 Oct 2019 11:22 am
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    A marvellous, marvellous story, this is!
    Yay, you took it up again... Brilliant!
    God how I wish the other WIP-wonderful- stories, written both here and other places, would be completed too. by other diligent authors. It is a HeartWrench every time when I come to a halt... over a cliffie.. hate it....the worst is about 80 per cent of the time it will happen. Please, writer-esses, do write fewer stories, and complete more often. A deep prayer.
    Well, I loved the title, it makes me feel like Nigella Lawson sneaking into the quiet room to raid the fridge, and I adore how the two wary 'boys' use their fingertips and body-voice to speak together as much as their words. They are so good at mirroring each other. Your story really does fill in the empty space in 'opus Harry P.' where they didn't reach each other. You have helped me find that joy. Have a good seminar and I look forward to read more. It is always welcome.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I'm so glad I decided to get back to this story. I tried every year or two during my hiatus without success, and I think I finally realized that it was going to haunt me forever until I just took the plunge and did it. So far no regrets, and everybody has been so supportive. :) Thank you for the kind words! I am so so glad that you are enjoying the story and that you enjoy their "body speak." :)

    P.S. What is 'opus Harry P.'?

Title: Chapter 26 - Midnight in the Kitchen 10 Oct 2019 4:11 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed the kitchen scene with Harry and Snape. When Snape told Harry to sit down and that he was still his guardian. I was pretty sure he was going to have “the talk” about him being up in the attic with two girls! Too bad Harry cut him off. 😄

    I really enjoy your writing. Thank you for sharing it!

    Author's Response:

    Haha it's tempting to include "a talk" now, you have no idea!! I'm not sure either of our boys would make it through a conversation like that in one piece at this point in their relationship, lol. 

Title: Chapter 25 - The Gift 10 Oct 2019 4:01 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I am so glad that Harry apologized and that Snape reciprocated!

    Author's Response: Me too! It took them long enough!

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