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Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 5:44 am
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cliffies are mean! On the other hand, you have a most wonderful writing style, and you do a good job of keeping the reader interested in the story. I'm interested in where you're taking this story, especially with regards to Harry becoming clarvoyent.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they are mean. *hangs head in shame*

    Thank you for the nice review! I love to hear when you think I'm doing something right! ;)

Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 5:18 am
Reviewer: lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my, this story is getting better and better. The end of this chapter is one of the most capturing ones, and well written, that I have ever read.
    It`s so, that I´ve to review to tell you.
    Lynx_lw

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You made me so happy with that amazing compliment!
Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 5:05 am
Reviewer: Keina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Arrrrrgg those cliffhangers are gonna kill me ! I love the story ! pleeaaaase don't make us wait too long ( OK I know it must be funny though ;-) )
    That is just GREAT ! And chocolate is great too ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Sorry, I couldn't resist. :) It struck me as the best way to end the chapter. I'm glad to have hooked people to read the next one, though! hehe - part of my evil plan!

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 4:26 am
Reviewer: Branwyn (Signed) [Report This]
    AAAARRGGGH.

    *PANTS*

    Okay. That was hot.

    The highlight of the chapter was, for me, definitely the bit where Harry thought Snape looked, "not normal for Snape, but like a teacher who'd just found out his student had been raised in a cupboard." FOR GOD'S SAKE SEVERUS JUST HUG THE BOY ALREADY.

    And I adore the anticipation of future suffering! Oh the angst! Oh the potential for cuddles!

    Are we ever gonna get cuddles out of this story, woman?

    Author's Response:

    Hi! Thanks for the review! I love fellow author reviews! I'm glad you liked that bit and still had the urge to yell at Snape. ;)

    Cuddles? :) I love cuddles, I do. But I have to feel like they're ready for it, and I don't think they're quite ready for it. I'd probably get some hate mail if after all this, I suddenly, start of next chapter, had them both professing their undying devotion to each other...hehe.  But I promise I'll keep your request in mind for the opportune moment(s)!

Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 2:50 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Love the anger Harry has I always wanted him to scream about the Dursleys. Maybe when he gets his thoughts together he'll ask about the other prophesy. I want to hear it too please make Harry ask please please. OK that is my graveling to for the week.

    Can't wait for more keep up the good writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review! Yes, Harry was in a screaming mood - can you blame him? I think I would be too, personally. ;)

    Re: other prophecy... You won't be waiting too much longer. :)

Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 1:59 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a nice long chapter! This was a very interesting chapter too, expecially the ending. I'm super curious to see whats going to happen next and hopefully you can update agian soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the ending. Next chapter next weekend, most likely. I would write faster if my boss would let me quit and still pay my bills for me...but alas! It is not meant to be... :(

Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 1:54 am
Reviewer: elocution (Signed) [Report This]
    O_o...

    i soo was not expecting that ending! i remembered the line from the dream, vaguely (i, being a very rabid reader, jumped in the chapter without brushing up on the dreams), but...O_o

    i should be working on my six or so projects (yes, and we've only had ONE week of school!) but you have sufficiently distracted me. feel proud! very proud!

    here, have some imaginary caramel!

    anyway, i liked snape's, "Why, Potter. You do dream of me, then? How…touching.”

    *snickers*

    i would write more, but i really really need to work on my six projects now. i'm sorry! but, before i leave, let me get this out there...if harry does not tell snape immediately about the whole snitch being true thing, i will yell at him.

    and if snape does not believe him, the sentiment will be turned to him.

    cheerios, and toodleoo! wish me luck with the attack of the rampaging paper cuts!

    Author's Response:

    :)  Yes, the dreams are fresh in my mind because I wrote them, so I had to remember that not everyone else will remember them as well. I hope it wasn't confusing!

    Oh, I am sooo proud to have distracted you!  Yay!  My mission is accomplished!

    Ooh, I'll do my best to spare them both from their yelling, but seeing as how they're both such prideful, stubborn individuals, I can't guarantee you won't EVER want to beat them over the head, understand...

    Thanks for reviewing again!  Oh, and good luck with the attack of the rampaging paper cuts!

Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 1:37 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was GOOD! Great chapter all around. Snape, Dumbledore and Harry were all excelelnt. I loved the last part where Harry realized he was living part of his dream. That's scary. This is developing really well.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 16 - Visions of Sugar Plums 27 Aug 2007 12:58 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    What an intense chapter! I was not expecting the ending at all, which makes it even more wonderful. God...poor Harry!...if he was anxious before, I can't imagine what seeing the future will do to him.

    You did a nice job with Harry's angry rant. I loved the part where Harry felt sort of trapped between Dumbledore and Snape...but found himself leaning more towards Snape.

    This story is just so great! I can't wait for more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! It really was a pretty serious chapter, so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. Yes, poor Harry! What's a boy to do?
Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 20 Aug 2007 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, what to say, what to say? There are so many things I love about this fic that it'd take all day for me to list them all!

    First of all, I just wanted to thank you for giving us readers something so nice to read! I especially love how you've kept Snape and Harry in character (and the Q&A amuses me to no end) - bravo!!! *thumbs up*

    Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter - please update soon!

    Author's Response: Wow, a whole day?  Aw, I'm flattered - thank you! 

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