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Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 2:09 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I look forward to him being caught by Dumbledore and Snape. It seems to me that Dumbledore is never stern enough with Harry.
Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 8:32 am
Reviewer: Branwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY YOU UPDATED

    *is so happy*

    Of course, now I'm dying to hear the conversation. Will be waiting on tenterhooks for next installment.
Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 6:48 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter! It sounds like Remus thinks Snape caused Harry's injuries. I was wondering when Harry would find the perfect moment to use the WWW Wall Watcher thingand now I really wanna find out what he's going to hear! :)
Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 6:44 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story and the direction you've taken it thus far. In particularly, I like your having kept all of the characters very canon. The Dursley's aren't so abusive to be beyond what's suggested in canon. Harry acts like Harry. And Snape is in character as well. Please don't take this wrong, but now that Dumbledore is entering the picture I'm so afraid of the story going off in a non-canon way. So many stories which involve Harry's abuse at the hands of the Dursleys have Dumbledore being utterly uncaring and willing to *knowingly* send Harry back into any degree of abuse. Canon Dumbledore was not being informed (as far as we know) that Harry was being hit by the Dursleys, or even that Harry was being starved. Somehow, many writers want to, in an otherwise very IC story, have Dumbledore learn about all manner of abuse and still send Harry back to it. Sorry to rant a bit. I realize that Snape seemed to be giving Harry the option of telling Dumbledore or not, so maybe Dumbledore won't be told of the abuse in this story. Or maybe you'll have a whole different approach. But still, I just worry because I do love the story and the characters have all been so IC to this point.

    Author's Response:

    First, allow me to say how thrilled I am that you like this story enough to be worried! Hmm...it's hard to reassure you without giving anything away, though. ;) I really, really want to know your thoughts after reading the next chapter. Which means I've got to get to finishing it... Please keep reading!

Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 6:05 am
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry can't seem to help his curious nature. Like everyone else he wants to know everything. I wonder if Dumbledore will accuse Snape of hurting Harry? Harry may have to rescue Snape.
Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 5:19 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow.....quite the story you got going. Hope you can update soon!
Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 18 Jun 2007 5:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Well actually, I shouldn't be saying Yay for someone easedropping.... hehe. Great chapter, lots of movement! Fast pace. I want to read more! I love theunsureness Harry has- worrying about what everyone's saying and what Dumbledore will say of the injuries he has. I wonder though- wouldn't he be really, really hungry?
Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies 15 Jun 2007 4:25 am
Reviewer: hey.branwyn AT gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is the most satisfying story I've read in a long time on the subject of Harry's relationship with Snape and the Dursleys. You do a brilliant job balancing their personalities with the emotional force of the subject matter so that it's never too cloying but also never lets you off the edge of your seat. I can't tell you how much I hope you update frequently and carry on to the conclusion.
Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies 11 Jun 2007 12:57 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Madam Pomfrey was well-realized in this one, and I really enjoyed Snape's snarky calling of Harry's lie. Snape's reaction to Harry's question about what he knew about abuse was excellently done.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your comments!
Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies 10 Jun 2007 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey!!! please update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: hey!!! okay!!! :) I can guarantee it won't be before the weekend though. This week is crazy.

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