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Title: Chapter 6 - Voldemort's Plan 17 May 2007 2:10 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Intense, but with no food, Hedwig gone how long before Snape's appearence is noticed.

    Author's Response:

    true, true. Keep reading! :)

Title: Chapter 6 - Voldemort's Plan 17 May 2007 12:11 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo! Great chapter! I liked the question and answering. I am a little worried about Snape becoming dehydrated though. it seems like he didn't drink anything all day.

    Author's Response: Do you know, I look forward to your review every time because you're so observant! It helps me to keep track of if I've waited too long to address something I'm planning or if maybe I've just plain old forgotten a detail. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 - Voldemort's Plan 17 May 2007 9:20 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I loved the exchange.
Title: Chapter 6 - Voldemort's Plan 17 May 2007 9:07 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter. Thier discussion turned out well for both of them and was very informative. Snape said the wards extend to the edge of the property...Does that mean Harry has to weed the garden now? :P Keep up the excellent writing and I look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Haha! Poor Harry, can't he ever escape from those weeds?
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 16 May 2007 3:50 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter...I loved Harry's attitude towards Snape. I can't wait for an update! Great job so far!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The words "great job" are always lovely to hear!
Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation 16 May 2007 3:37 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha ha...that was evil of Harry, I loved it!
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 15 May 2007 3:44 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    And here I hoped one would have a chapter 6... Ah well...

    Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    I know, I'm bummed too that I can't write faster. If only writers could write as fast a readers read - I would love that world! Except there would be an awful lot on my reading to do list...

Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 15 May 2007 1:01 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Hope you can update soon!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I hope I can update soon too!

Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 15 May 2007 12:16 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! Haha Snape was sooo wrong about Harry's life and it was practically proven to him. Keep up the excellent writing and I really look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Snape totally needs a wake up call re: Harry, don't you think?
Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears 14 May 2007 7:25 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape was very well done in this. I liked Harry's feeling that Snape was working on a puzzle. That is very Snape. I think Vernon was also in character in this. For some reason, he is deferring to Petunia on Harry, but I can see him finally losing it. However, I think Harry has some form of protection that keeps Vernon from physically striking him in canon. I remember the time Vernon grabbed him in OotP and got a shock or something. But I can see how for the purposes of this story, Harry probably needed a little bruising. I am eagerly awaiting updates on this story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the insight - that's very interesting! And I'm glad that you otherwise think the characterization is working. Thanks for reviewing again!

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