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Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation 11 May 2007 9:52 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha! Harry! So mean! :) Great chapter! I'm worried over what that "or else" means though, Harry didn't weed the garden... I was thinking that maybe Snape could do it. Tehe. Thanks for posting!


    Author's Response: Ha! Wouldn't that be great? Snape, the house-elf...I want to run for cover at the mere thought of suggesting it to him.
Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation 11 May 2007 6:31 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending with Harry tormenting him with his lovely manners. Are the Dursley's going to find out about Snape?

    Author's Response: Thank you! I guess we'll have to see about the Dursleys, won't we? But I don't think you'll have too many more chapters to read before finding out the answer to that question...
Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation 11 May 2007 4:40 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL! Subtle Revenge... and Sev calls himself a Slytherin!

    Author's Response: :) hehe.  Totally!
Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 07 May 2007 10:41 pm
Reviewer: blue artemis (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a good take on this challenge. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

    Author's Response: I've got it all planned out...I just hope you guys like the direction I take it. Keep the reviews coming! :)
Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 07 May 2007 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Celebwen Telcontar (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting... Please continue.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far.
Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 07 May 2007 7:30 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    The tension between Snape and Harry was well done again, and I love the foreshadowing of the last two paragraphs. It will make the understanding between the two more enjoyable later. I also liked the fact that Snape assumed that the room was not Harry's and threw him out in the middle of the night.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your feedback! Both those parts were fun to write. You know, I think I remember JK Rowling saying once that Snape was one of her favorite characters to write. After trying my hand at it (not to say my version comes anywhere close to her talents), I'd have to agree. :)

Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience 07 May 2007 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry sure does have it rough, but I think he might have hurt Snape when he kicked him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I sure hope they both make it out in one piece. I'm glad Snape has you to feel sympathy for him, with Harry not on his side. It probably did hurt, especially considering he's still recovering from other injuries...

Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 07 May 2007 11:23 am
Reviewer: katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very well written. I love this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 07 May 2007 9:10 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    And I can't wait to read them! :)

    Loved this chapter. Nice drama. One thing I was worried about throughout, though, was their noise level. I was expecting the Dursleys to come pounding on the door at any time. But fantastic chapter. How about another? :) Tehe. Thanks for posting!

    Author's Response: I know, right?! I kept telling them to keep it down, but they're both so stubborn, they wouldn't listen to me! Well, all I gotta say is Harry got pretty lucky this time. Wonder if that luck will continue... ;)
Title: Chapter 3 - Close Quarters 07 May 2007 7:48 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Part of me wishes that Harry would've blurted out that the room is a damn sight better than the cupboard!

    Author's Response: Totally! Part of me wishes he would have said that too! But he wouldn't let me write those words into his mouth - He was too embarrassed already. Poor kid...

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