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Title: Chapter 58 - The Third Battle 14 Jan 2021 5:24 pm
Reviewer: Saadia (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally agree with Handa(reviewer).Your fic is really exciting.I can't tell you how I love your writing!I'm checking it back everyday.I even use your fic in learning English (I'm from Russia).
    Thanks for this enjoyment!
Title: Chapter 58 - The Third Battle 14 Jan 2021 1:51 pm
Reviewer: Handa (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh nooo a cliffhanger!! I don’t think you understand how excited I get when I see an update! I don’t think I’ve ever been so invested in a story! Thank you so much for this amazing chapter, I just love how you write! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Aaaa it makes me so happy to hear that you're so happy when OME is updated! :) Thank you so much for the kind review, and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 58 - The Third Battle 14 Jan 2021 7:15 am
Reviewer: natalie (Signed) [Report This]
    I can’t tell you how excited I was when I got the notification that you had updated! I’ll admit I’ve been checking P&S daily for the last week to re-read OME and check if there was an update - I’ve missed this fic so much! This chapter is definitely going to be on my favorites list. We all know that Snape would die before saying “Harry, go ahead and risk your life to save mine” but I love the way you wrote their compromise, with Snape (very, very grudgingly) going along with the plan. I also love that Snape brought up Harry’s promise -- I’m sure it hit a sore spot, especially considering their previous experiences with promises! It’s funny that the majority of the times where Harry and Snape fight, it just goes to show how much they care about each other’s well being. It’s so fitting that Snape’s way of showing affection (God forbid) comes in the form of insults. Although it might be obvious to the reader, it was so good to see Harry vocalize how much he needs Snape -- to beat Voldemort, for sure, but in almost all other respects as well. I think one of my favorite parts of your characterization of Harry is how he is still a teenager who wears his heart on his sleeve despite his maturity and power. This chapter was also just incredibly well-written (like every other chapter, of course :)) -- I loved your description of Voldemort’s icky, no-good mind & how we were able to visualize Harry’s use of the mental arts. I’m so excited (and nervous) to see how Harry’s confrontation with Voldemort goes, but since you’ve promised us a happy ending…. ;)

    Since you liked my last Merlin fic rec, I have another: For the Weary by lady_ragnell on AO3! It’s been a while since I’ve last read it, but I hope it’s to your liking! You might want to avoid the sequel though (it contains slash). I also found this platonic Merlin/Arthur fic list on fanfic.net: https://m.fanfiction.net/community/The-Best-Merlin-Arthur-Friendship-Stories/72690/! I haven’t had the chance to check out those fics yet but hopefully there’s some gems on there!

    Your Merlin fic idea sounds like just the type of thing I’d love to read! I’ve read fics where Merlin goes back in time and fixes everything without Arthur knowing, but your version is much better -- I feel like Arthur not knowing sort of defeats the purpose (and their relationship’s development throughout the seasons). Feel free to bounce any Merlin-related ideas off me at any time, the show still holds such a special place in my heart! Although I haven’t watched all the Avengers movies, I look forward to your fic nevertheless! Tony and Peter’s dynamic is always a joy to read about and I’m assuming it’ll be a part of your fic :) And a OME sequel… well, you know how much I’d welcome that ;)

    About AO3, I’m pretty sure you’re right in that there’s no way to easily upload an entire fic in one go, unfortunately. I’d be happy to look over your tags/formatting when you do upload, though! There’s a sad lack of platonic Harry & Snape fics on AO3 (which is why I discovered P&S in the first place!) so I’m sure an upload there would be highly appreciated!

    One other thing: Although I’ve missed this fic dearly, I hope you don’t feel forced to write or anything! Your mental health always comes first and we all understand that :)

    Thank you for an awesome chapter & I hope your 2021 is going wonderful so far!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for another long review!! (And sorry it took me so long to reply!) You know, one of my favorite dynamics between Snape and Harry is how Harry wears his heart on his sleeve and Snape keeps his under lock and key, buried down deep. They're such an interesting contrast and have a fun effect on each other. 

    Ooh thank you for the other Merlin rec! I haven't read it yet, but I marked it for later. I like the description. :) And I bookmarked the list site - thank you!! You know, I didn't like the way they ended Merlin, and I didn't like a lot of things about the last season, but I DO think they did a good job with the reveal. Their conversations afterward were Just. Right. I wouldn't want to mess with it or do it any differently. That's why I much prefer letting their relationship at that point stand, but having them going back together to fix all the other stuff that went wrong. 

    I think I need to upload to AO3 before I finish writing OME so I can let people know it's there, so I might go ahead and start uploading chapters this week. I'll let you know when it's up so you can look it over and let me know if I did anything wrong with the tags, format, etc. :) Thank you for offering!!

Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 25 Dec 2020 6:57 pm
Reviewer: thegorgonexperiment (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, excellent chapter and what a lovely Christmas present too! Thank you for sharing!

    Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope you had a Happy New Year!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 24 Dec 2020 9:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: You're welcome and thank you for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 24 Dec 2020 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great Christmas present! Although I hope we get the next part soon, this is a great chapter. It is just another snake, has Harry tried talking to it? I know, it been used, just a thought. I love to see how their relationship is developing.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I love that idea, but no, in OME, I theorize that the snakes are more representative of dark magic than any kind of literal snake that Harry can communicate with. That would definitely be cool though!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 24 Dec 2020 2:37 pm
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    So much wonderfulness in this chapter! I love Harry's conversation with Hunter and Snape being brave with the snake.
    I worry about Harry's resolve to legilimize Voldemort, but I understand his reasoning - Severus is someone he loves and he's going to do whatever he can to help him.

    Author's Response: Aw thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Yes, it's a risk, for sure, but he definitely thinks it's worth it!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 23 Dec 2020 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the Christmas present. I am looking forward to see what happens next! I hope you have a Merry Christmas!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you had a Happy New Year!!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 21 Dec 2020 12:26 pm
Reviewer: natalie (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s me again (the person who will never stop gushing over this fic)! After a rather grueling finals week, this chapter has been the greatest early Christmas gift I could ask for!

    Specific notes about this chapter: Despite the obvious oh-God-Snape-is-in-pain-and-might-die, I found this chapter so sweet. Some of my absolute favorite scenes are those where Harry and Snape just good-naturedly chat/banter, and I loved the interaction between grumpy Snape, Harry, & Hunter! Like Harry, I’m also overly invested in learning more about Snape’s social life… or lack thereof. For all of our sakes, I wish Snape would just agree to play 20 questions or something of the sort & satisfy our curiosity :) It’s also always so fun to see Harry and Snape’s relationship through the eyes of Hunter and Kneader — who knew a snake could be so perceptive? I’m already so ready for the next chapter & Harry Legilimizing Voldemort (and Snape’s reaction of course :))!

    Regarding my review from last chapter: I am so so happy that you decided to pick OME back up again, your writing ability & creativity really has paid off! I’m also absolutely thrilled to hear about your plans for a Merlin fic! Other than Harry & Snape, Arthur & Merlin’s dynamic is probably one of my favorites of all time. Merlin’s finale absolutely *crushed* me and I almost religiously read fix-it fics and s5 AUs to fill the hole it left in my heart :) My biggest frustration is that we never get to see Arthur and Merlin truly working together as friends with Merlin’s magic revealed! There’s also way too many moments in the series that weren’t given enough closure & way too many opportunities for Merlin & Arthur to have some fun with this whole magic thing! I honestly could rant forever about Merlin and what could’ve been season 5… but let’s just say that I’m so happy that you might be working on a Merlin fic sometime! And again, if you ever are in need of a beta/editor, I’m always happy to help ;)

    For Merlin fics, I’ll have to look at my old fic rec lists, but I remember some of my favorite (non-slash) Merlin & Arthur fics were on AO3! When I find my complete list of favorite Merlin fics I’ll be sure to send them your way, but for now, one fic that randomly comes to mind is To Be Known by crookedassembly! It’s a pretty short angsty magic reveal one-shot.

    I noticed that you mentioned you were going to upload OME/other fics to AO3 — that’s the fanfic site that I probably have the most experience in, so feel free to let me know if you have any questions about it! Also, I would love to follow any writing blog that you might put out there! In my experience, I find Google Sites and Wix both super easy to navigate when building a blog/website. Google Sites in particular has lots of different tools to help you link different websites/documents, format a webpage, & more! I’d also be more than happy to help with that!

    I hope you have a restful & enjoyable holiday season!! Keep being amazing :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review!! I love writing Harry & Snape chat/banter scenes, so it's nice to hear that you like to read them. :) And thank you for the Merlin rec - I read it and enjoyed it! Feel free to share any more that come to you! :) :)

    The Merlin story I have in mind to write would begin in the final moments of the last episode, wherein Merlin makes a deal to go back in time (as his own past self, not as a time traveler) to correct his mistakes that led up to Arthur's death. The catch is that only he will remember...but yay for us, Arthur remembers too! So they traverse the final season again, working together, figuring out their new dynamic, trying to fix things, only events diverge greatly and their "fixes" result in some new challenges. (Because who actually wants to read a straight-up retelling of that season anyway? Not me.) So yeah. I want to write my Avengers story first, and I eventually want to pen an OME sequel, so we'll see if the Merlin one gets written. It would be fun to write. :)

    I'm thinking about getting started uploading chapters to AO3 over the next week or two. It looks like I can upload all chapters one at a time first as a draft, and then post it all at once? I experimented with ways to import and upload, and it looks like there isn't a totally easy, one-upload way to do it? Every way I tried involved correcting the formatting. And I might have to rely on people to let me know if I miss any tags. :)

    Thank you again for the long review! I really appreciate the kind words and the help!!! I hope you are having a fabulous new year. :) 

Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 21 Dec 2020 11:01 am
Reviewer: Saadia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks! It's the best gift for me to read your fanfic!

    Author's Response: Yay I'm so glad! Thank you for reading! :)

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