Snape raped his mind and Harry is the wrong one? Hello? Lupin, same up!
I really like this story. And your Lupin is refreshingly unfair ;)
Bad manipulator Lupin; no grace lost on him
I would be as nice as Harry, i think i would shut both Lupin and Snape, not talking to them at all.
Oh I do hope there is an update in the near future...this is a marvelous story :D
I almost always avoid Severitus stories because 99% of the time they're riddled with fluff and a very out-of-character Snape who loses his stripes the moment he discovers he's Harry's father. Plus, I cannot seem wrap my head around the fan created concept of Snape-as-Harry's-father.
However, I quite enjoy this story. Not only have you avoided the cliche plot device of using Snape being Harry's father as a way of miraculously transforming Snape into "Mother-of-the-Year" (as you put it), but you've also managed to keep Snape in character. Very, very in character. He is such a bastard in this story--I love it.
I want to backhand Lupin for being so weak and submissive, which I presume is your intention. He is allowing Snape to influence him negatively and it's ridiculous. I really enjoy your characterization of Lupin. Bravo!
Poor Harry. He's stuck with a bullying Snape and a spineless Lupin. The boy has no one and nothing, and it's sad as hell. This is a very claustrophobic story; I feel like I'm trapped and suffocating right there with Harry. Not too many fics have the power to make me feel that way, so I can definitely appreciate ones that do.
Snape and Lupin are absolutely selfish in this story. It's... well, it's messed up, that's what it is.
Amazing and believable story. Very original and different from the rest in this category. I hope you haven't abandoned it; the Harry Potter world of fanfiction needs more stories like this.
Excuse me while I go sit in the nearest corner and patiently wait for an update. :)
| Title: Chapter 15
| 14 May 2010 4:32 am
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| Reviewer: Huffca (Anonymous)
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More, please? You've hooked my interest and emotions, very successfully, I hope you continue to share your story with your readers, if, on/off-line life permits you, that is. Take care and ta for the story you've shown so far, tis rather wonderful. :]
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