Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 8 27 Jan 2008 7:05 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad to see that Harry will get to see Ron. Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Yes. I was planning to torture him a bit longer but my beta said poor Harry needed just ONE darn thing to go his way. So I've given him a break.  :-) In my draft Snape was going to say something like "Under no circumstances are you to mention meeting or even hearing about Hadrian Snape, and if you disobey me I will rip out your liver and make you watch me boil it in one of my cauldrons."
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jan 2008 4:56 am
Reviewer: ouch! (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Crap. I can't believe you ended it right there. I want to read more! I was cringing everytime Lupin lost his temper with Harry. I kept expecting him to blow up. I didn't think he would take it so well.
    And i'm really interested as to what's Snape's reaction is going to be when Harry is sorted. And if the prophecy is still the same. Please update.
Title: Chapter 7 30 Dec 2007 11:33 pm
Reviewer: jellylegs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Where'd ya go?? It's been awhile since you updated...please continue! It's good.
Title: Chapter 7 23 Nov 2007 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loving this, hope you add some more soon!!
Title: Chapter 7 03 Nov 2007 11:31 pm
Reviewer: SentinelHuntress (Signed) [Report This]
    wowowowwww!!
    Just finiehsd it and well, I'm torn between liking and hating it ;)
    I mean I can understand Harry being furious about not being told anything in advance but also understand the adults for not telling him ...
    It is a a damn well written story so far and I'm looking forward to see how the relationship(s) will develop. So, I hope for an update sometime soon :)
Title: Chapter 7 23 Oct 2007 3:28 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I know I ought to have reviewed each chapter but I just had to keep clicking "next". An excellent read and I definitely love your take on the Severitus Challenge. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Title: Chapter 7 04 Oct 2007 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, the correct thing to say is probably something like, "No doubt, RL is keeping you occupied quite thoroughly. Neverthless, I hope you can post soon, b/c I enjoy the story and am anxious to see what happens next..." But a more realistic comment would be something in the nature of, "IT'S BEEN A MONTH...I'm dying here... please (gasp) ... need update ..." ;-)
Title: Chapter 7 24 Sep 2007 6:41 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like your lupin, and the recurring Headlines. Harry seems brave, but still a teenager. Good job.
Title: Chapter 7 17 Sep 2007 10:42 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I love, love this! I love the tenseness and awkwardness, and the drama. Snape is done fantastically, and I love your Harry. And now he's Snape's son. I look forward to more awkwardness! hopefully soon?

    Thanks for the update! it was great!
Title: Chapter 7 14 Sep 2007 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yea! Thanks for the update. The characterizations are excellent, and your writing style is engaging. Nice job. I do, however, have one question (and if I missed this point in your story, I apologize)... if Harry took polyjuice, wouldn't it transform him into an exact replica of Snape's current form? Or, was the formula prepared using something from when Severus was younger, such as a preserved hair or something?

    Author's Response:

    There's going to be more on that, and the potion will be pretty important to the story in the next few chapters.

    The things Harry is told are not necessarily the whole truth. Right now all we know is that Harry drank something that he was told is polyjuice, and instantly transformed into someone else (someone who looks the way Harry thinks Snape's son would look). Harry, of course, has been told that Snape has a son, and therefore thinks he has been turned into a replica of Snape's son. For now he has no reason to be suspicious of the potion.

    I hope that sort of answers your question. :-) 


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