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Title: Chapter 28 30 Sep 2013 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 28 29 Sep 2013 7:16 am
Reviewer: Orchid (Signed) [Report This]
    I discovered this story the other day, and I instantly began devouring it. This is truly one of the best fanfictions that I have read in a while! And, it is so refreshingly different than all of the other 'Severitus' challenge fics that I have read.

    While I did initially think that Lupin was behaving a little out of character at the begin, I now completely understand and appreciate your portrayal of him. I think you have struck a beautiful balance of the grief, anger, and fondness that he feels.

    Your portrayal of Snape is spot on as well, although I find myself hoping that Harry is wrong/misinformed about his potion making abilities. But, perhaps that is just wishful thinking on my part...

    In addition, I also find myself curious as to what Harry/Hadrian looks like now.

    Anyways, thank you for the amazing fic. I look forward to your next update! =)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I did set out to make it different from other stories. I don't necessarily go out of my way to avoid using ideas that have been used before, but there are some things that have been overdone to death.

    Readers have been divided on Lupin since this story started, and most don't like him. I think in the beginning Lupin's character was the one that changed the most from where he was in canon at the same point in time (right after OotP). I don't mind if he isn't likeable... a lot of readers will like him even less by the end of the story, I think. He has a lot of problems, and he isn't fit to be what Harry needs. He cares about Harry, but he isn't able to solve Harry's problems on top of his own. He is forced into trying to do it anyway, and he is failing more often than succeeding.

    Harry is misinformed or downright wrong 9 times out of 10, no matter what the subject. He sees what he expects to see.

    There will be slightly more about Hadrian's looks in a future chapter, where Hermione continues her quest to prove that Hadrian is Harry. He just looks a lot like a young Snape.

    Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 28 29 Sep 2013 6:40 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad Harry's magic is back. He didn't even notice his presents when he got back to his room. I hope he sees them in the morning. Who was Snape talking to when Harry was waking up? I liked the heart to heart between Draco and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    After all of that, he wouldn't have noticed if he got back to his room and found it swarming with Death Eaters. He will get his gifts sorted out once he gets some sleep. :-)

Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2013 4:44 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was surprised that Remus didn't just say it was a boggart on the third floor. Harry wouldn't have gone near that with his current memories. Snape as Harry's guardian was a surprise. It certainly isn't going well.
Title: Chapter 3 29 Sep 2013 3:28 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way you are presenting the characters. I can imagine Lupin, in particular, saying the lines you wrote. And Snape is being his usual snarky self. The mysterious things going on at Grimmauld Place are interesting and I'm looking forward to finding out what is going on.
Title: Chapter 1 29 Sep 2013 3:03 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting first chapter. Harry must really be feeling bad. His friends were hurt and Sirius and Dumbledore both dead.
Title: Chapter 28 29 Sep 2013 3:01 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo Hoo!! Yay! Harry's magic is back and he is again a talented wizard and seems that he has even 'more' skills than before.

    What is going on though I wonder? Harry is reacting strangely to 'something' and I am very anxious to find out what!!

    I love this story, so happy to have updates to look forward too. The plot becomes more and more intriguing as the story goes on. I love how you leave us on the edge of our seat.

    Okay, looking forward to the next update!!

    Author's Response:

    A lot of what's going on with magic (and not just Harry's) is my attempt to fill in some gaps or puzzling issues with the way it was handled in the books. For example, why would a wand that's "excellent for transfiguration" and a "good wand for charms" (HP1 Ch5) choose Harry's parents when they were just eleven and couldn't have actually been good at those subjects yet? Clearly they already had something in them that set them up for success at those particular types of magic. And a magical object (wand) was able to somehow access this information. So, Harry comes to Hogwarts and he quickly figures out which types of magic come easily to him and which are difficult. Except, for Harry, his magic was not entirely his own. Not only did he have a horcrux stuck in him for over a decade, mixing its own magic with his (evidenced by his ability to speak to snakes... it became a skill he could consciously use, so there was definitely mixing involved), but in this story he also had these charms that did who knows what to him from birth. So, yes, Harry is able to use magic again, but it isn't necessarily the same magic he had before. He might find that his magical abilities are not the same as before, and not necessarily for the better. He is one magical year older, which does give him a bit more power overall, but he isn't going to be discovering superpowers or anything like that.

     Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 27 27 Sep 2013 1:49 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter love the swirling emotions thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 27 25 Sep 2013 6:00 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a very good chapter. Harry's interactions with the other characters were well done. Harry's concern about Snape risking his life was an interesting development. Snape telling Harry that Snape would take Harry's side when it really mattered was also a nice touch. I am curious about what Snape thinks is going to happen that evening. I assume whatever it is has already started since Harry is so tired. As always looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Harry has been feeling for a while already like everyone has been taken away from him, but he's not exactly ready to admit that if Snape dies there really isn't anyone who can take him in. He definitely wants to cling to the hope that Lupin or the Weasleys could take care of him until he is of age, but he's starting to come to terms with the possibility that they just can't. Also, he finally recognizes that Snape is important to other people (people Harry cares about). That's a step forward, considering that not long ago he saw Snape only as an obstacle or a source of irritation.

    Well, Snape is not sure what will happen, which would, of course, drive him crazy. Since he can't find the reason Harry is having problems in the first place, he feels like anything could happen. That's stressful. He is relatively sure it will happen on Harry's birthday (like Lupin explained to Harry, birthdays are magical milestones), so his way of trying to prepare for whatever might happen is to keep a close eye on Harry. He can't be TOO concerned, though, since he's still splitting his attention between Harry and a potion that's in another room (he could have put the cauldron in his quarters instead of in his office, if he really thought Harry was in any danger). He probably just wants to make sure "Hadrian" doesn't go walking around the castle with eyes that are suddenly bright green, or something.

Title: Chapter 27 25 Sep 2013 5:15 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    I keep waiting for him to discover that Harry was neglected and still hope that moment is coming! At least he is being a bit less abrasive. Ugh on the fact that Remus is a MEAN drunk!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, he's aware Harry was neglected. He just doesn't recognize that it's important. To him, neglect just doesn't rank very high on the list of things to whine and complain about, especially once you're out of that situation. Harry has a completely different understanding of what is and isn't worthy of getting upset about. He cares a lot more about being unloved and unwanted than he does about being starved or hit. So, when he tries to explain, he picks the exact things Snape calls "whining" instead of things that would actually set off some alarms for Snape. He also has an unfortunate way of blurting things out in a flippant or sarcastic sort of way, which makes Snape dismiss his words because he focuses on the  "disrespectful" tone Harry uses toward him. It all leads to a big miscommunication going on between them, with Harry trying to articulate how unloved and unwanted he felt at the Dursleys (because that's the thing that was the worst about living with them, in his mind), and Snape thinking, "There he goes again, whining about not getting the latest and greatest toys for his birthday and complaining about the gifts he did get... ungrateful brat!" Then Snape makes some sneering comment and Harry just shuts down.

    Yes, that's what I was going for with Lupin. Mean, but not intellectually impaired (because that would be pretty useless).

    Thanks for reviewing!


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