Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 19 13 Aug 2013 4:29 am
Reviewer: Dclady (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story greatly!
Title: Chapter 25 12 Aug 2013 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter and well handled emotion thank you
Title: Chapter 25 08 Aug 2013 8:00 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    I had meant to review during my read but just had to get to the next chapter each time! Enjoying it very much, but cant help a little gripe about Snape's relentless and judgemental jabs at Harry EVERY time! It seems Harry definitely needs to open up a bit more re his history but surely Snape must see some difference to his preconceived impression of Harry. Had hoped the 'sick' scene :>) would have helped but Snape still didn't see his chance... looking forward to your next update.. and maybe just a little warm and fuzzy for harry?, it must be so wearing for him.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying it!

    I think Harry and Snape are really having some sort of misunderstanding when it comes to Harry's childhood. Snape might be more sympathetic if Harry would focus on something that doesn't sound like, "Oh, poor me, I didn't get what I WANTED." That said, he is clearly aware that Harry had a rotten time with the Dursleys. He just hasn't moved on from being aware of it to caring.

    Harry won't be getting many warm fuzzies in the very near future, but Hadrian might. I agree that Harry is very lonely and worn down right now. He's under a lot of stress from multiple sources, and we all know how tiring it is to be under constant stress day after day. That's why he's started having panic attacks. He just can't deal with everything without being allowed a way to vent.

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2013 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Flummox (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was so excited when you started updating this again, and the chapters and getting better and better! There are still so many mysteries that need to be cleared up (magic and potions are making me really curious), and I have no idea how things will end up working out! I also really like that while we understand why Harry is making the decisions he is, he still comes across as quite bratty/sulky, for lack of a better word, which is much more realistic. I hope Snape soon discovers more about Harry's home life, though!

    Author's Response:

    Fortunately for Harry, it's finally his birthday, so he won't have to shuffle around like a pathetic Squib anymore. That will be one load off his shoulders. :-)

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2013 2:16 am
Reviewer: Avery Riddle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow this is good, I only wonder if anyone snape or harry will realize they actually are related? Keep writing this is great.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Snape already knows (he found out at some point between Dumbledore's death and the time he took Harry from the Dursleys). Harry will find out eventually, but not very soon.

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2013 2:08 am
Reviewer: 2inchfish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, you update quickly. It's lovely (although I suspect you'd get more reviews if you updated less than once a week.)

    Now to figure out what'll happen when Harry goes to the chamber of secrets, and when the horx will be revealed.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    I LOVE reviews, especially when readers tell me what they like, what works for them, or what doesn't work for them, since I can then try to fix any problems (plot holes or a lack of clarity). But, I really don't care how many of them I get, or how many per chapter. I don't know if waiting longer between chapters would increase the number of reviews (I'm not convinced it would), but it would be silly to keep a completed chapter un-uploaded. :-)

Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2013 7:40 am
Reviewer: Grace (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! Though I feel sorry for Harry and his talent for always doing the wrong thing haha

    Can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Yes, I think that is the biggest and best-developed talent Harry has. LOL

    Next chapter will be out soon. My beta got it back to me this afternoon, so I just need to edit it and discuss a few things with her (we usually argue/discuss at least a few things).

Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2013 7:08 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, I enjoyed the chapter. I am surprised that Harry did not find it curious that Snape could remember--after 16 years -- that Harry was born just before midnight. In my view, that is something only a parent would remember after that much time has passed. It went completely over Harry's head. I have been trying to remember if the challenge requires that Harry learn the secret from a letter or if he just has to learn it on his birthday. You have so many different possibilities set up. It could be from the pictures, from the pensive, from the book or Snape could tell him. You are creative so maybe you have something completely different planned; in any event, you have me eagerly anticipating your next installment.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Pretty much 99-percent of anything he's told goes right over Harry's head. Even if he had noticed, he probably would have assumed it was just one of those things everybody (but him) knows about The Boy Who Lived. As it happens, Snape not so much remembers it (he didn't know he was Harry's father until this summer, either), but he had a reason to know the exact time because it concerned "Hadrian".

    The Severitus challenge has 7 requirements, but only 4 of them are plot requirements (the others are requests, such as to be sent a link to the story). The plot requirements are as follows: (1) Snape is revealed to be Harry's father. (2) Lupin returns to Hogwarts for whatever reason. (3) Harry undergoes a progressive change in appearance starting on his birthday (which is the one that I'm taking the most liberty with, but it will happen!). (4) Story is mostly based around Harry and Snape (slowly getting there...).

    Many stories I've read use some kind of letter, Pensieve memory, Gringotts vault item, or some other device like that, which is why you might be thinking that that's a requirement. There are actually no requirements at all about how Harry learns any of this, or the timeframe. He doesn't have to learn on his birthday, or from any specific person or any specific method. I don't know why most Severitus stories end up being so alike in how they deal with the big announcement.

Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2013 2:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    This whole Harry is a Horcrux and him having to die, is so sad for Harry. He thinks Snape is going to kill him?

    I loved that scene of Snape taking care of Harry. Very cute. Very unSnapish. But still Snapish, because of course he wasn't mushy about it, but somehow it showed caring for Harry just a little.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. You are spoiling us!

    Author's Response:

    It is sad, but it's kind of his own fault for messing with something he was told not to touch.

    Yes and no, on thinking Snape will kill him. It's a very complicated problem. If he is a horcrux, then Dumbledore's message is valid and Dumbledore's orders to Snape are also still in play. He doesn't have any reason to be afraid Snape is going to stab or poison him at first opportunity, because Snape doesn't believe that Harry is a horcrux. He also has managed to understand that Snape never wanted to follow those orders. It's just that "doesn't want to" doesn't translate to "won't have to".

    Yeah, Snape managed to be pretty decent to Harry even when they were in private. The exchange in the hallway doesn't count, since that was a public space and Snape would have acted like a concerned parent out of necessity, but he didn't completely drop the act once the door was closed. Or, at least, not until Harry was well again and had managed to annoy him. He was even willing to answer Harry's questions without malice, right up until Harry made the choice to be untruthful and changed the focus of the conversation to something Snape considered frivolous.

Title: Chapter 24 04 Aug 2013 1:00 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a well thought out chapter!

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