| Title: Out of the Frying Pan
| 16 Aug 2007 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: ER (Anonymous)
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Can Tobias charge them the Muggle way? I really enjoyed the morning banter between Tobias, Harry, and Severus. Please update asap.
| Title: This Ole' House
| 10 Aug 2007 11:31 pm
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| Reviewer: neerihs_rose (Anonymous)
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Excellent chapter although i doesn't seem smart to stay in Riddle's house.I like the stern Tobias.Is there going to be any more issues concerning the Sirius,Tobias and Harry relationship in the father and son way?It would develop the story a lot.:D
It's kind of funny how all the wizards and witches look to Tobias for instructions when he is only a muggle.
| Title: This Ole' House
| 10 Aug 2007 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous)
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I'M LOVEING THE STORY SO FAR KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
It's strange there are parts about this chapter I like and others I just don't. There's just something off with it to me. I think it mainly consists of how Un-angry Harry really is acting about the whole Imperio being put on him. That's a reeeaaally big deal in their world, they call it unforgivable! I dunno, some forgiveness I think came to early in that area but its not over yet so I will wait and see what you come up with.
| Title: This Ole' House
| 09 Aug 2007 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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| Title: This Ole' House
| 09 Aug 2007 11:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Shian (Anonymous)
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I'm really enjoying this story. The only thing I don't like is how Tobias still has a relationship with Eileen. It seems like such a betrayal of his sons. How can Harry respect him, when he's in a relationship with the women who kept Tobias and Harry apart for so long, and who is basically responsible for Harry having to stay with the Dursely's? When is Tobias going to wise up?
| Title: This Ole' House
| 09 Aug 2007 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Jen77 (Anonymous)
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I am surprised he didn't swat him for disobeying. Harry is pushing it a bit. I think his anger is going to push him in the wrong direction.
| Title: Why The Pelican?
| 09 Aug 2007 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: krepta (Anonymous)
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wow, it's REALLY good. there are some grammatical errors and such, but I like how you approached the story. Most people make Tobias out to be an abusive distant jerk, which might be true, but you made him a real, caring person. And you didn't make Harry and Snape instantly close, which most people tend to do, and the punishments seem very real rather than just writing them for the sole purpose of punishing somone (i hope you understood that). well, for the most part, good job. UPDATE SOON!!!
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