This is excellent. Can't wait for more!
Wow wonderful, please continue I look foward to it!!!
Skittles and a choclate frog too!
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: Solitare (Signed)
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Very good start I look forward to reading more...
skittles
Excellent story so far! I'm glad Harry apologized for the pensieve incident. Great start so far and hopefully more soon!
| Title: Forcing Confidences
| 27 Jun 2007 5:12 am
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| Reviewer: Vicki (Anonymous)
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Oh, lovely, lovely story, and so well written! Your Snape is marvelous, believable and utterly in character, yet not a complete bastard. And Harry...I hurt for your Harry. What a hard spot to be in, what a choice to make! Particularly the bit about not wanting Dumbledore to know, not wanting to know himself if Dumbledore knows and still leaves him there...oh, yes, I hurt for your Harry. And I hope Snape does something for him. And that Dumbledore doesn't know, for Harry's sake. I don't think this Harry can stand many more disappointments, much less outright betrayal.
| Title: Forcing Confidences
| 27 Jun 2007 4:47 am
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| Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
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Even better than the first chapter. This story is, without a doubt, going to be one of my favorites. I hope you keep going at a steady pace.
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 4:46 am
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| Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
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Fantastic story! You have done Snape with his inner ramblings just as I thought they must be. You have him just as ill suited for the job he's doing as I always imagined. Perfect! And Harry's apology was fantastic. The thoughts you had him spill out were so beautifully heartfelt and deep. I know I'm going to love this story.
| Title: Forcing Confidences
| 27 Jun 2007 4:15 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous)
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Great fic. I just read it today. Can't wait for the next update!
Great chapter, can't wait to see what Severus decides to do, and what Harry decides to tell him. Keep up the great work, and please update soon. LES
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice start! At first the POV seemed weird because i'm not used to reading first person, but the style really works. It has more of a directness I find that I'm enjoying very much.
I liked Harry's apology, and how you ended the chapter was just right. A cliffhanger, but there's more to read. Hooray!
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