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Title: Epilogue: Restoration 09 Sep 2007 7:26 am
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a very satisfying ending to the story, as long as I know there is a sequel in the works - otherwise, I would be sad to see it is ended. To be honest, I would love one that followed Harry all the way to adulthood... with Snape as his friend/mentor/protector. Slash or father-figure, either way it goes, this was a wonderful fic in its own right!
Title: Confession and Absolution 09 Sep 2007 2:18 am
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    I've read to this point before, lost trackof it, and now have read it again.
    This is a brilliant fic.
    Imust, however, admit that I Hope the Reason Dumbledore brought Severus, is that while he will be 'civil' and appropriate, he can trust Severus Not to be so... and has thus, brought him along with full intent for extreme prejudice towards the Dursleys.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 02 Sep 2007 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Karen Wood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was super, you have just caught Snape and Dumbledore perfectly. Thank you
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 30 Aug 2007 7:02 am
Reviewer: madbrad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was an excellent little story; written so very well! A straightforward plot, but you gleaned a lot from it - sympathy for Harry, respect for Snape, more understanding for Dumbledore. And I loved this epilogue with his friends.

    I found this story via a recent recommendation in a Yahoo newsgroup, which stated that 'Branwyn is the queen of Luna stories', something along those lines. I love a well-done Luna (which is rare), and noted that you seemed to pair her up - ever so lightly - with Harry here.

    I've just joined potionsandsnitches.net, but it's a Harry and Snape biased fanfic site, I think. If you have other stories - particularly H/L stories - elsewhere, I'd appreciate your letting me know. My e-mail address should be accessible in my profile here (I'm 'madbrad'). I'm off to look at yours now anyway.

    Great little story, thanks!
Title: Making Amends 30 Aug 2007 6:25 am
Reviewer: brad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter; great story! You write perfectly, professional grade.

    I loved the picture stuck to the wall of the cupboard; that's one of my favourite 'poor Harry' scenes, one of his friends visiting his cupboard and seeing a picture, or a scribbled message ('my name is Harry and I am six today'), something, like that.

    I really thought that you were going to have Snape leave Dursley locked in the cupboard; I'm surprised you left him off the hook!

    (By the way, this site's used of a five-digit security code for posted reviews is *too* difficult, this is my third attempt to post this)
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 29 Aug 2007 10:05 am
Reviewer: Eurothrashed (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this story. From beginning to end everyone was in character and your vocabulary was very, very refreshing. I'm favouriting this.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 28 Aug 2007 8:01 am
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear Branwyn,

    I am compelled to convey my appreciation of your story and to relate that your compendious prose has convinced me of your exceptional proficiency in the art of storytelling. :)

    So therefore, I am sharing with you...CHOCOLATE! By the pound! For YOU!!!! Because I LOVE that reviews are like chocolate, don't you?!?! :) :)

    Good chapter - I loved the letter! It was so incredibly great how Snape could be so clever and insulting and caring and insufferably smart all at once. :) I can't wait to see what Harry comes up with... (Dare i admit that I stole a glance at the next story already? But I haven't read more than the first couple paragraphs because I forced myself to come back and finish this last chapter first, even though I desperately want to know what happens!)

    So here I go... :)

    Author's Response:

    *huge idiotic grin*

     

    You absolutely make my day, you know that? 

Title: Things Unspoken 28 Aug 2007 7:04 am
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Snape! How sweet are you! I love how he prefaces his little speech by telling Harry that if he tells anyone else what Snape says, he will call him a liar. hehe :)

    I do hope Harry is okay...but seeing as how there's a sequel... :)
Title: Making Amends 27 Aug 2007 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it, love it! Everyone is so wonderful in this chapter - very in character. Poor Vernon...if I didn't dislike him so much, I'd feel kind of sorry for him. Heck, I'm a Muggle and even I know better than to try to chum up to Snape!
Title: A Conversation 27 Aug 2007 5:00 pm
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how Dumbledore reacts to the "suggestion" that Snape stay with Harry at the Dursleys. :) This was a fun chapter to read. On to the next!

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