Love it! I am very much looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Ah. Sweet ending. I loved the idea of the melting doorways! That was so cool. A very interesting picture of Snape trapped in the Gryffindor common room. Hehe. Also, I like the fact that Snape is admitting his weaknesses, even if Harry won't always admit them full on.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 11:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::cackles::
Oh we're getting a protective Snape!
Bloody brilliant chapter! I'm glad you've updated. I love your interaction between the two of them. ::grins::
Update soon.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Floozie (Anonymous)
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gooooood!
more more more more more more more more!
i loved this chapter!!! it was really good, i love the interaction between them. and the fact that they still argue even tho they are trying not too. its very IC of them!! kudos to you!!!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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Yay you finally updated
i liked this chapter, I love the physcology between Harry and Snape that relates their childhoods
great work
Another good chapter! Hope you'll update again soon!
This is a really, really good story.
Somehow I missed your last update, so I got to read two chapters tonight. That was great.
I am very, very impressed with your writing of both Severus and Harry. I think you are truly portraying them "in canon" as they react to the events in your story.
The relationship is being built, but slowly and cautiously and pretty honestly too. It's very difficult for both of them and your story makes that clear. But yet, as a reader absorbed in your characters, I see hope that both of them are going to benefit enormously when everything is finished.
Very, very good job.
The last line was great, 'And suddenly he doesn’t mind so much that Snape locked him up.' I was smiling after I read that...in fact, I'm still smiling, lol. It was a good chapter. I love the amount of Severus it has in it!
Had to go re-read this. I have forgotten what was happening, lol. I think I cried a little the first time I read it, I managed to keep my composure this time. (clapps) Good chappie, I gotta go read the next now! (although I should be in bed, lol. It's midnight!)Great story. The emotions are shown so well in your writing and you don't have to use a lot of words. I can feel what the characters are feeling, the angst actually makes my heart hurt! It's brilliant and congrats with the featured story award. I voted for you, glad you ot it!
Scorpia
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