Thank you SO much for these chapters. It's really nice you've been able to write some more--we've missed your excellent work! Thank you, again!
Oh, what a wonderful chapter! Made me weep, with Severus'--with THEIR--breakthrough. Slowly, painfully, however clumsily it may happen, it's wonderful to see it. Thank you.
What a completely fascinating set of lines at the end! I loved the progression that their discussion takes through this chapter.
I absolutely loved that last part. I loved all of it, the arguing, the sadness, the tentative reaching toward each other. All of it was really very good and worth waiting for.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 4:19 am
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! This chapter was interesting. Please please please update again SOOOON!
It was brilliant! I love how you kept them off balance and then finally got them to talk to each other about their childhoods and how Severus is protecting Harry even if he won't admit it. You deserved the Featured Story too!
that was rotten of snape. you have him so well pegged
nice job!
I love how this story is so deep psycologically. (is that how it's spelled?), and how every decision made really affects the characters and how they feel and react. this may sound like something trivial, but to see it so well done as in this fic is something i feel is rare.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 27 May 2008 1:34 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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They are such broken men and your story is so poignant. Dumbledore needs to be hung, shot, quartered and scattered for the birds.
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