My favorite lines: "I wonder if you have to do something brave.."
Snape: "Something else, you mean?"
Perfect chapter.
Nice touch, that both children Lily and Severus protect Harry! How poetic!
| Title: Chapter 19
| 17 May 2008 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: kelly (Anonymous)
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omg you need to update
like NOW!
Okay send me word when you do so plz!
Luv Kelly
| Title: Chapter 17
| 17 May 2008 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: kelly (Anonymous)
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why can't harry depend on Sirius, he is, afterall, his godfather...?
| Title: Chapter 12
| 17 May 2008 9:19 am
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| Reviewer: kelly (Anonymous)
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this is really good, you're really the Dumbledor of this story aren't you?
| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 May 2008 6:20 am
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| Reviewer: kelly (Anonymous)
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i just wanted to say that this is absoultely amazing! Really, you've captured Harry's innocence and Snape's arrogance perfectly to cannon, I don't know anyone else who has done it better! Really great work!I applause you and really can't wait to see what you have instore for Harry, and Snape, I hope you write more!
The chapters really do just get better and better!
Keep it up!
Luv Kelly: 10
| Title: Chapter 10
| 01 May 2008 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous)
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It was really good, and it made my heart hurt! I love stories that make it eaasy to feel how the characters feel. I try, but i'm not a very good writer! lol.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 29 Apr 2008 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Definitely worth the wait. This is a very emotional story; difficult, sometimes, to read—but incredible in spite of that. Keep it up.
On a side note: I'd prefer a little less on the Umbridge front, but then, I loath even reading her stinking, evil, perverted, sick *name*...
| Title: Chapter 19
| 24 Apr 2008 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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This story is amazing. I love the give and take between Harry and Snape, and the way you show their stories and reactions is brilliant. Great job.
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