| Title: Chapter 11
| 24 Sep 2007 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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I really like Sev's break down. Though I think Snape should point out more that Dumbledore is the reason Harry was at the Dursley's and the abuse is essentially Dumble's fault. Can't wait for the prophecy that Snape overheard to come out! Hope you have plenty of torture planned for Dumble from the two of them.
Wow! Excellent chapter! Snape going a bit mad in the end was a very nice twist! Keep up the excellent writing!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 23 Sep 2007 4:45 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 22 Sep 2007 7:24 am
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| Reviewer: em_conway4hp@yahoo.com (Anonymous)
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Ohhhhhhhh the bit with Snape and Lily made me go all misty " I assure you camelot was not all it was....ohhh please write more.
| Title: Chapter 11
| 20 Sep 2007 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Amarie (Anonymous)
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I've not reviewed before but this story is great! i especially like when Snape calls Harry 'Evans'. Love it!
Wonderful chapter. I loved this line: "He’d forgotten, held prisoner in this Room, that there is another side to him out in the real world. A less interesting side, probably. One that is mostly concerned with friends and Quidditch and homework and girls."
And then he goes and proves he isn't just an average schoolboy by how he deals with Snape. Lovely interaction, and all the rapproachment is so beautifully captured when Snape calls him "Evans."
Dude, that was...hilarious and heartbreaking. I can see canon Snape having a breakdown exactly like that in a situation like this. Well written.
Wow...what a chapter! And no, I didn't see that coming. I never thought Snape would have cracked first knowing Harry's tendency to become temporarily psychotic...lol.
I loved the vision Harry used to calm Snape down. The imagery was fantastic.
Also, the bit about the wand cores was brilliant. How did you think of that? I never would have thought to juxtapose thestrals and phoenixes. Great job with that.
I'm still trying to figure out if Snape and Harry possess (and will continute to possess) more of a friend/mentor relationship or if it will blossom into something more...guardian-like. Either way, I'm enjoying the ambiguity of it.
You're doing an awesome job with such an original story. I love it. Your story definitely deserves to be featured. It's brilliant.
| Title: Chapter 11
| 19 Sep 2007 11:24 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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haha Sev gone mad, excellent! XD
Snape cracking was a long time in coming, but appropriate, nonetheless. I'm wondering if he would have lasted longer if it wasn't Harry he was trapped with. That boy does seem to be the one with never ending questions.
Anyway, great chapter. I loved Harry's word picture for flying. Almost made me feel as if I could fly, too. And Snape's comment about going flying after they kill Dumbledore was priceless. Thanks for the update.
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