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Reviews For Whelp
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 8:42 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good way to end this awesome story XD Cant wait to read the sequel!

    virtual hugs and kisses
    ~Jamie
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 4:08 am
Reviewer: owlsaway (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 3:46 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent ending. As I was reading the three stories, I had felt this one might be nearing the end, and your final chapter felt very "right." Overall, some truly strong writing and characterization. I love the way you kept everyone very much in character.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:45 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE THIS STORY. I was about to cry now that it is complete but you said your doing a sequel so I'm happy now.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:39 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have enjoyed reading this story very much. I liked how you built up the realationship between Harry and Servus and how Draco, Ron and Charlie were introduced into the mix. Thank you for the story.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:12 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Congratulations on Whelp becoming a featured story! It was definitely well-deserved. I'm SO GLAD you're staring a sequel soon!! I became slightly faint when I saw that this was the last chapter...lol. But I think you chose to end this part of the story at exactly the right point. It's as if Harry and Severus have completed a phase in their lives and are ready to move on. I seriously can't wait for the sequel! Thank you for writing such amazing stories :)
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 2:09 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was great. I loved your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Title: Chapter 27 03 Sep 2007 1:17 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    This story was just so cute and... all-around terrific. I loved it. Definitely one of my favorites.
Title: Chapter 3 01 Sep 2007 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I've read this chapter so many times I thought I'd just drop in a quick review before I went to bed - I love how you've done Snape, how he's jealous and when he's all like:

    "He tended to rely heavily on that expression when he was unsure of something. Or frustrated. Or bored."

    It's nice to know that even Severus Snape can be unsure. Even though he's trying to hide it XD But we know better, Snapey! Oh, and btw, I've made it my personal mission to review every chapter of this story, because I've read it so many times on ff.net and enjoyed it so much that it's high time I give something back C:
Title: Chapter 2 01 Sep 2007 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Can I just say that I love how you've still made Harry defiant (well, sort of) and how he won't eat the dog food. It's really nice how you've sort of hinted that, even though he's put up with so much, he still knows he's worth more than a dog.

    To steal another author's phrasing, you are made of awesomesauce XD

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