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Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely loved this last scene with Harry and Snape. "Sploden Snap" was so cute, I laughed outloud and wished, again, that I could just take little Harry home. I love it when Harry is able to laugh at the things Snape says.

    Oh, and thank goodness Harry's nightmares are getting better! I think I found myself breathing innnn and ouuuut with Harry when Snape was trying to calm him...lol.

    OH! Another scene I liked was when Harry, Draco, and Ron were eating at Hagrid's and Harry was on his stomach, hovering over his food...I thought that was a great description!
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Nicole (Signed) [Report This]
    I had a warm feeling every time Snape corrected Harry's use of words.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 8:30 am
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love this story. I think the relationship between Harry and Snape is wonderful and I love the friendship that is growning between Harry and Draco. You are creating an amazing story. I can't wait tos ee what happens next!
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 7:06 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a cool idea! Great show of creativity.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 6:28 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    So Snape CAN teach Occlumency. :-D

    Great chapter. More Charlie sometime, please.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 5:08 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    *Sniff*

    I want those nightmares to stop! The poor child! I was lucky enough not to suffer through very many nightmares as a child, but the few I did have were very powerful and I can still remember the with shocking clarity. I couldn't imagine having them night after night. *Shudders*

    I love Charlie. Everytime I see his name - anywhere I read it - I want to give him a big hug for some reason. Then jump on the back of his broomstick like a biker chick. Heh heh. I'm so glad you implimented him in this story.

    Great work!
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 4:21 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, as always. I loved Molly and Severus and their chat with Dumbledore looking on but the kids playing was the most fun! Oh, and Hagrid too, I love that guy.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 3:34 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this chapter.

    I love that Molly knows what she's talking about, and isn't in love with her own first impressions, and doesn't let Snape's reflexive, semi-insulting insularity scare her off or keep her from telling/asking him what she needs to.

    I love that Snape is able to unbend enough to realize she *does* know what she's talking about and that a little oh-so-scary openness can be tolerated in a good cause.

    I love that Charlie, teenager though he be, isn't resentful about being stuck with a pack of little kids all day and is nice to--rather than merely tolerant of--Harry.

    I love that Hagrid isn't stupid, even though some make the mistake of portraying him that way.

    I *especially* love that Harry gets to make a little progress and have a whole day go by without something horrible, or painful, or scary, or devastating happen to him.
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 3:21 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow Harry managed to go one day without ending up in the Infirmary. Great chapter and I'm eagerly awaiting more!
Title: Chapter 26 29 Aug 2007 3:19 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I like what you did with Molly.

    On the technique to avoid nightmares, I've used something like that before with young children and it worked fairly well.

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