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Title: Chapter 25 28 Aug 2007 11:38 am
Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey I really enjoy reading your stories especially this one. Usually I only lurk and read but I want to encourage you to continue writing your stories. So please continue to update as soon as possible. I'm interested to know what happens to next. Thanks!

    Best regards,
    Jonathan
Title: Chapter 25 28 Aug 2007 4:20 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    That's kinda strange that your chapters doubled up like that. Lol. *Shrugs*

    An interesting lesson for Severus to teach Harry. But it makes sense, given the circumstances and the Slytheriness of it all. I liked it. I'm also glad that Harry wasn't really punished, though it did make a thought come to mind. I wonder if at some point Harry might begin to use this ... lack of punishment to his advantage. It would be something a kid would want to test out, especially when he gets to the point where he's comfortable enough to do so. Or it wouldn't even necessarily be a conscious thing, but he could begin to assume he's able to get away with things.

    Anyway, I like the idea of Charlie being there too, lol. Poor guy. He babysits at home AND at Hogwarts. Lol.

    Looking forward to more :)

    Keira

    Author's Response: That is weird about the chapters, didn't notice it myself.  But now I've deleted one.  Yeah, Harry will be testing his limits, absolutely.  He likes knowing what the rules are, but there's lots more ways he can get into trouble than there are rules.  ;-)  Charlie's 14 (15 in December) at the time of this story, so he's probably well used to the baby-sitting schtick.  Poor thing.  More will be forthcoming . . . er, tomorrow.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 25 28 Aug 2007 12:54 am
Reviewer: rachel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another awesome chapter, not my favourite so far but still pretty great!
    Ms.Weasly is ok!
Title: Chapter 25 28 Aug 2007 12:22 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Why do I love it so much when Snape retrieves Harry's bottom lip from his teeth? lol. I am SO weird.

    Okay, now, Draco is clearly in need of a good wallop. Well, maybe not THAT...but I'm currently shaking my head at the little menace. I loved, however, the scene where Harry lied to keep Draco out of trouble. He's so sweet...I adore him in this story.

    OH!...And how clever to include Charlie! For some reason I was expecting one of the twins when Molly spoke of another son. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see how Harry, Draco, and Ron interact. A seven-year-old Ron...how adorable.

    Great job, as always :)
Title: Chapter 25 27 Aug 2007 8:47 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay hooray Ronniekins XD and Charlie how cute! cant wait to read what these for will be up to ;)
Title: Chapter 25 27 Aug 2007 7:55 am
Reviewer: Nicole (Signed) [Report This]
    I am worried. Harry seemed like to follow Draco around. But Draco isn't reliable enough. He cannot be a good leader. And Harry cannot be the savior if he remains a follower. I hope Ron's brave and loyalty can help Harry.
    Draco seemed jealous of Ron already. I wonder how the two could get along. Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon please.
Title: Chapter 25 27 Aug 2007 6:15 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter, Harry is SO sweet. I can't wait for more.

    Hey your the Author enjoy your cliffhangers, laugh at all of us that have to wait to see what happens. ENJOY that power.
Title: Chapter 25 27 Aug 2007 6:00 am
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear! Well, I suppose Severus should just be glad the Molly didn't bring the twins. *tries to imagine that group of five**fails* Poor Harry, with Molly there to mother everyone involved, he might just get the fright of a lifetime. I'm somewhat surprised he's taking to children so easily after the abuse from Dudley, but *shrugs* everyone is different. Anyway, keep up the wonderful work; I'm always surprised at how quickly you update all three of your stories, and how great they are to read.
Title: Chapter 25 27 Aug 2007 5:55 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love these kind of long chpters! :)
Title: Chapter 1 26 Aug 2007 6:37 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I love stories with younger Harry, and this is no exception - you've characterised him really well, and I am very impressed with the scene at the end where he's going through the trash - I think you've illustrated Harry so well in this first chapter. I'm definately in love XD

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