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Title: Chapter 23 21 Aug 2007 5:14 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy hell! No wonder he's afraid of baths! Good grief. Wow. That's intense, man. The closest thing to a scary bath memory I have is being about 1 or 2 and sitting in oh.. 3 inches of water. My mom left the bathroom for a moment with my brother watching me. He wasn't REALLY watching me though, and I kinda laid down on my back. I couldn't get back up because it was so slippery, but I wasn't drowning or anything. It scared the crap out of me though. Enough that I still remember it. Lol.

    I feel so bad for Harry. He constantly thinks that if he messes up Severus is going to send him away. As if it's love under certain conditions, as opposed to unconditional. *Shakes head* How can you not love that kid? I always wondered how his elementary teachers didn't see right through everything, what with how sweet he is. Even in canon, he's a very sweet, bright child. Who wears terribly oversized clothes while the rest of his family looks way nice. Blind teachers. Lol.

    Keira
Title: Chapter 23 21 Aug 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    poor wittle Hawy XD I
Title: Chapter 23 21 Aug 2007 3:11 am
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I wouldn't think that lake water would be good for his healing hand or his lungs. And then thinking he had to go back to that Hellhole. You just want to scoop him up and cradle him like a baby. And poor Draco being molded just like his Dad.
Title: Chapter 23 21 Aug 2007 2:24 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter. The last line gave me chills. You have a great way of describing ordinary things using rich language...The line: "Pale eyebrows went up over grey eyes like a summer storm." is one of the best similes I've read in a long time.

    I'm so glad Severus apologized before lecturing...and that he's waiting for Harry. I think if Snape would have spared Harry from the "Rules Lecture," it would only make him feel more secluded and delicate, and let's face it: Harry doesn't like being coddled...at least not all of the time.

    And by the way, your stories definitely deserve to be featured, not only because they're brilliant, but also because you update regularly to keep us antsy readers quite happy...lol. I've never known anyone to write so quickly, yet produce such brilliant chaters...every time. :)
Title: Chapter 23 21 Aug 2007 1:31 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute ending with Severus assuring little Harry he'd never send him away. As usual, great chapter!
Title: Chapter 23 21 Aug 2007 1:17 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a very, very sweet chapter!
Title: Chapter 22 19 Aug 2007 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Draco :( And poor Harry! Good lord, the kid has been through so much, although I think it was really clever how Severus discovered Harry's powerful accidental magic by the exploding squid. That was brilliant.

    I still feel sorry for Draco, though...you could tell he was very sorry, but I have a feeling he won't be able to escape punishment for this one. I just hope Lucius doesn't find out. But then even if he does, maybe that will give Severus a reason to stop Lucius from whatever he does to Draco....*stops* I guess I'll just have to wait until Monday. lol.

    I really loved this chapter. Great job!!

    Author's Response: Hi Jade,  Thanks, as always for your kind review!  And yes, I should have a new chapter out today, with apologies from pretty much every character possible.  ;-)  Oh!  And thanks for nominating Whelp for Featured Story here.  V. cool!
Title: Chapter 22 18 Aug 2007 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Padfoot_has_my_heart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is great!!!! I love it... and I love snape!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I should have a new chapter out by Monday.

    Cheers,
    --rachel

Title: Chapter 22 18 Aug 2007 2:15 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    If you truly loved us, your faithful readers and reviewers, you wouldn't make us wait until Monday for an update. That would be just plain mean and barbaric.

    Poor Draco! He is a bit of a bully, but he is just a kid. Snape was a little harsh with him. Makes me even more worried for Harry. Being a mom, and having kids that have done some pretty dumb things, I can understand how Snape will probably react. First, you're just so relieved that they're okay that you just want to hold them forever. Then, once you know they're okay, you start to think about what could have happened and about how stupid they were, and you just want to kill them (not literally, of course). So I'm guessing that Harry is really in for it. Don't keep us waiting too long to find out what happens. Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Next chapter, all will come out in the wash, for Draco and Harry, and Sev, too, I swear . . . but I gotta write one for Shadows first, so I'm afraid a little barbarism is in store.  ;-)
Title: Chapter 21 18 Aug 2007 1:32 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh! Well, I guess we will finally see how Severus deals with Harry when he actually misbehaves. I hope he count to ten (or maybe a hundred) before dealing with him.

    I liked the part where Severus tells Harry to stand up straight and to not let Lucius know that he is scared of him. Lucius is just a big, evil bully, isn't he? I'm wondering if Harry will find out how Lucius treats his own son.

    Anyway, thanks for the update.

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