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Reviews For Whelp
Poor Harry. Poor poor Harry. His thoughts, and his past experiences, make me feel so bad for him. It's heartbreaking. And at the same time, I feel just as bad for Snape, for what he's going to have to accomplish - all in all - to heal Harry, especially with his own past to over come. Doing great :D Hope to see more soon! Keira Author's Response: I can not be forced to reveal the truth of the Blood Ritual, no matter how many cookies you offer me! ;-) And yeah, Snape and Harry really are just two messed up individuals. I guess that's why throwing them into cage matches and watching the fall out is so much fun. Thanks for the review!
"I always tell you everything you need to know." "And not a tenth of what I want to know," He never outright tells anyone anything! Anyways excellent chapter and hopefully more soon! Author's Response: Yeah, Dumbles has always sort of infuriated me, with his half-truths and outright omissions. I guess I see Snape being even less tolerant than me. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks! By rights, they should be under it for far, far longer, and maybe go to Azkaban, too, but there's a limit with how much stage time I want to give them, as I find them completely despicable. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on a chapter for "Shadows" right now, but I should get to Whelp tomorrow, most likely.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I like that you had Snape and Harry clear up the miscommunication between the words Freak and Magic when you did. Poor little Harry shouldn't have to live through that confusion anymore than he had to, lol. I loved the ending of that scene too. Little kids are so precious. I like the spell Severus used on the Dursley's as well, though I hope the repercussions are too harsh for five year old Dudley. Though he was a bullying git, he's still a small child who is moreso learning from his parents still than not. In any case, I think it's a smart idea to have their deeds come back to them. Good thinking :) Can't wait for the next chapter :D Keira Author's Response: Hi Kiera! Thanks for your review, every time I see one, I get all happy. :-) There'll be loads more miscommunications between Snape and the li'l nipper, don't fret, but this one had to get cleared up, although there will also be a lot more ocnversaations about how magic isn't bad, and neither are the people who use it. Mostly. As for Dudders, he's actually 7 (same age as Harry) but I get your point. He won't get anything back but what he's dished out. I'll have Sev explain more about the spell in an upcoming chapter, which should be . . . tomorrow? I hope? Thanks again, --rachel
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you *did* enjoy the next chapter. ;-)
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