Wow. Oh wow. That was.. harsh but they deserved it. Poor Harry. Awesome pace in this chapter, it felt like it moved fast, but there was quite a bit happening in it. I enjoy seeing Snape's interactions with Harry. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing the chapter, as I have a yen on against the Dursleys, always have.
I'm counting down to Wednesday, so I hope you're going to pull through with your promise! ;) I've seen this story updated a couple of times recently but never had the chance to look at it until tonight. I'm particularly partial to feral child-like stories, in that odd way I'm sure you can understand, and so it was a pleasant surprise to find out how well this one is written. I'm quite impressed with your ability to use words and emotions as you do. You certainly know what you're doing :)
I look forward to the update! You seem to have put up quite a few chapters in such a short amount of time, and that has me excited :D Great job!
Keira
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Keira! I have a lot of time to write at work, so I can get one chapter done a day, just about. I alternate between this story and "Walk the Shadows," which I just updated today. I appreciate your kind words, and hope the story continues to appeal. I'm certainly having fun writing it. Thanks again!
Another excellent chapter. Alright, I've decided I won't hex the Dursleys. What they need is a good old fashioned a** whupping. Sorry, getting my Southern on there. hehe
Beautifully written, as always.
Great chapter but I hate the cliffy ending! Why is he screaming?? I suppose I'll have to wait until Wednesday then. :)
Ack! Poor Harry! This was such a sweet chapter, and I was expecting a gentle ending, but it threw me! Ack! I wonder what's wrong, is it a nightmare? lovely emotions here. Harry is just precious.
Great job so far i think this is really original and I love how your not rushing things!
~Spiorad
Awwww! YAY! Lovely chapter. And yes, I noticed that Harry had a bath- well a shower. Tehe. :) lovely chapter. Thank you for sharing it!
Wonderful new chapter happy to see you can log back in here to update.
Author's Response: Yeah, *cough* I'm a bit of an idiot. Shhhhh, don't tell!
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Awesome chap. So he#ll be Harry Snape now wont he? Hope you can update soon!!!
Awesome chapter, and the end is so sweet!
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