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Title: Chapter 3 23 Jul 2007 11:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Once or twice a week! Not once, Snape! :P The git.

    I just really noticed this paragraph clearly, I didn't the first time:

    "He has just turned seven, Severus, yes." In truth, Severus knew exactly how old the Potter boy was, could calculate it down to the hour if need be. He'd had to, in the maddening months between his one short encounter with Lily and her subsequent whirlwind marriage to that idiot, James. But no matter how he counted or calculated, the numbers always came up the same. The whelp was James', not his.

    Hmmm.... :)

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm....

    Hmmmm, indeed. :-) I meant for that part to be deliberate foreshadowing of one kind, and along with Dumbledore's vague-ish statement at the end of chapter 7, things could go either way. Thanks for reviewing!

    --Rachel

Title: Chapter 2 23 Jul 2007 11:30 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. So he can unclip the leash. Why doesn't he? Does he not know where he really could go?

    Vernon is so nasty. I hope he gets what's coming to him.

    Author's Response:

    HI Jan!  The issue over unclipping the leash will be dealt with a bit later, and yeah, I have plans for Dursley.  Very special plans.  Thanks for reviewing!

     

    --Rachel

Title: Chapter 1 23 Jul 2007 11:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    So now that you're posting ere, I guess I'll review here. :)

    I like that Harry is seven years old at the start of this fic. it's a little unusual, I think. Poor Harry.
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 6:36 am
Reviewer: glassdragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, please update!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 4:44 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Quick update! yay! Keep up the excellent job!
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jul 2007 3:29 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, what a twist. Looking forward to more Harry/Severus interaction. Keep up the great work, update soon, and enjoy DH it was great. LES
Title: Chapter 6 23 Jul 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor little Harry, thinking he's going to be a house elf. It is rather a bad sign that he had such a low reaction to having a weird creature pop out of nowhere, although I suppose at his age it might not be as bad as if he were older.

    Good chapter.
Title: Chapter 6 22 Jul 2007 11:37 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap! Read the book and cried! Hope you can update soon!!! (after u finish the book of course!)
Title: Chapter 7 22 Jul 2007 11:37 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, neat twist. I like how he popped out with that little gem. Nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 6 22 Jul 2007 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Poor little Harry thinks he is a house elf but I'm sure Snape will straighten things out.

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