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Title: Chapter 17 07 Mar 2010 5:45 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Reading your note made me realize that I've only commented once on this story and I wanted to remedy that as such. I am greatly enjoying this story. I love the punishments being doled out, very fitting, and your Harry is very believable. I also like your Draco and I hope to consider so in the future. Maybe nice Harry will rub off on Draco. Oh, but I hope that doesn't get Draco beat...
Title: Chapter 15 07 Mar 2010 5:14 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW!
Title: Chapter 6 05 Mar 2010 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Fred (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow that was a really good Chapter I loved it I can't wait for Harry to actually meet Snape and talk to him!
Title: Chapter 27 22 Feb 2010 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    AW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is SO cute - and wonderfully written. You did very well with this story and I absolutely adore it. ^^

    I think I'm off to read the sequel now. Can't wait to see what other (mis)adventures our boys get into.
Title: Chapter 27 18 Oct 2009 8:08 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I wanted to read the entire story before I reviewed. I have really enjoyed this story. This is how I always thought Severus and Harry might be with each other if given a chance early in life. Whether adopted or bio, Severus makes a great dad. No parents know how to be parents, children do not come instructions! Great work!
Title: Chapter 27 17 Sep 2009 6:18 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this was a curious story, to say the least. I did enjoy it (and am very grateful that I came to it when it was already complete). Kudos to you for writing such a good story.
Title: Chapter 27 13 Jun 2009 3:34 am
Reviewer: Jessicca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for writing such a heartwarming, authentic and affective story.

    The characterisation and individual voices were excellent, pacing was good and narrative in general was brilliant.

    This story really touched me and I have spent many pleasant nights devotedly reading this. You are very talented. I really really enjoyed reading this. This is one of the best stories I have ever had the good fortune to read. My compliments.
Title: Chapter 27 13 May 2009 6:58 pm
Reviewer: klc061874 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story awsome Snape/Harry relationship
Title: Chapter 27 11 May 2009 8:10 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    Bestest!!! My inner child enjoyed it a lot too, I must say.

    (She has her own opinions on everything we do)
Title: Chapter 27 06 Apr 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved it.

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