Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 23 30 Jul 2025 10:20 pm
Reviewer: queenrinacat (Signed) [Report This]

    it was important for severus to apologize to draco but draco isn't traumatized the same way harry is and the apology could have happened in the hospital wing

    nelli could have fetched him

    does pomfrey have any abused child training at ALL

Title: Chapter 5 08 May 2025 2:45 pm
Reviewer: ClaraLockhart12 (Signed) [Report This]

    Excellently writen . loved the change of character when sev thought harry was dead.

Title: Chapter 27 18 Mar 2024 5:53 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s been many years since I first read this. I’d forgotten how wonderful it is. It’s going straight to my favourites, and I shall definitely be reading it again - sooner rather than later.
Title: Chapter 27 10 Nov 2022 9:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for the wonderful story! It had such intensity and range from despair and darkness to love and fluff-filled moments. Simply wonderful.
Title: Chapter 26 10 Nov 2022 9:33 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter read like a perfectly warm cup of hot chocolate.
Title: Chapter 25 10 Nov 2022 9:30 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Adding in a Weasley, what fun!
Title: Chapter 25 10 Nov 2022 9:30 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Adding in a Weasley, what fun!
Title: Chapter 24 10 Nov 2022 8:55 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, thank you.
Title: Chapter 23 10 Nov 2022 8:49 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The conversation with Draco was nicely done. The chapter end was sweet.
Title: Chapter 22 10 Nov 2022 8:46 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a scary adventure for the two little lads. I hope they learn their lesson.

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