awesome.
i think this story is becoming my favorite of yours.
Harry's idea is fantastic! I can't wait to see this one work. Thanks for posting again, I didn't get the message that 38 was ready. I'm so happy to have two at once!
I really liked the way you had Harry protect Dumbledore's mind, both in his own attack on Voldemort's mind and afterward. And I loved the way you had Snape get there in time to stop Harry from killing Lucius. Naturally, I can't stand Lucius, but Harry shouldn't be killing him.
Now I just worry a little about Snape having left Dumbledore in a body bind, not realizing what had been done to Dumbledore, and hoping Dumbledore is still well protected from Voldemort and can tell Snape what happened -- or at least recover until Harry can tell Snape.
Awesome chapter! And I almost never use that adjective.
oh my gosh that was a quick update and an awesome chapter. I really love how you manage to keep Severus so Snapish, but so loving towards Harry at the same time. Keep up the awesome awesome work, and please update again soon. LES
ahhh that was awesome. Totally need an update so we're not going crazy from the cliffe. Can't wait to find out what happened to Voldemort/Dumbledore and what Severus is going to do to the headmaster once he finds out. Keep up the awesome work and please please update again really soon. LES
Lol, well it is kind of fun. I'm glad people are actually doing something now, instead of just laying unconscious in bed and about the be stunned. This is a much better cliffhanger than that.
I really don't enjoy Lucius at all, with him being around Harry and all. For some reason he seems creepier than Voldemort. I guess old Voldie is just a crazy loon after all.
I can't believe that Remus managed to 'hold off' his change. How exactly is that possible? It must be painful anyway, to resist that for so long. I liked how Severus's calmness just prior to the change unnerved Remus, that made me smile.
Anyway, looking forward to the next part and probably some more action! All the best!
great as ever ! Thank you ;-)
Great Chapter! I really liked how Harry's fighting back, yeah!! "Harry met his gaze and smiled." I can picture it too!
And Severus, it's great to see that he has formed such a bond with Harry and is concerned for his safety. I hope that you'll tell us how Dumbledore/Voldemort poisoned his mind so, and how Severus was able to break away from it. Because it seems that Dumbledore/Voldemort didn't expect him to wake up.
I hope that Harry was just beat up with some spells, and that he's going to be ok after this. Also, I hope he has to get himself out of this predicament alone. It would be too easy if he is able to break the bonds between Voldemort and Dumbledore and Dumbledor leaps valiently to Harry's rescue. I really want to see Harry defend himself against Malfoy too!
Well, can't wait for the next chapter!! And, your cliffs arn't bad at all, but extremly exciting and I can't imagine what is going to happen next...
Rabid encouragement... definitely what I'm throwing at you right now. I adore this story and I don't have so much to say about anything until you leave the cliffies. I read every chapter the minute I see it, but I've already told you how well I think you write the characters, and how impressed I am with your writing. Just post the next chapter, please?
Poor Harry...though I have a feeling I'm going to be saying "poor Dumbledore" after Harry gets through with him. (Take that, you bad villian!)
I was rooting for Severus to run to Harry's aid! I was on the edge of my proverbial seat for that part.
Thanks for updating so fast and keeping the chapters so consistently well written! As usual, can't wait for the next chapter.
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