I, along with everyone else, I'm sure, really really want a sequel!! There's still so much of the story that we don't know and need to know!
But, great chapter, as always!! I was smiling soo much when Severus called his chambers "home." It was perfect!
But, we still need to know what's going on with Ron and Hermione. Hopefully Harry isn't damaged to the the extent that he can't even tolerate a visit from his closest friends.
I really liked Harry's meeting with Remus especially with the chocolate making him feel better. I wonder if it's really the chocolate or if it's Remus himself? (Totaly irrelevent, I know!)
Well, write write write!!
... What's going to happen? *begs for more*
I do hope you write a sequel. Harry still has a lot of hurdles and challenges ahead. He's got to deal with Ron and Hermione, both over what happened in the summer and also his changed relationship with Snape. Somehow he has to learn to be around the children of Death Eaters, and in particular Draco -- although I do wonder what Draco would think of his father's actions. And then eventually Harry has to get to the point where he can face the Death Eaters and Voldemort again -- not just without throwing up, but to really stand up to them. The last part of that seems like a long way off in terms of Harry's healing, but still strongly related to the events of the summer. So a sequel sounds like a good idea to me. Besides, this is my favorite of your stories!
You must write a sequel. You must continue to write until your eyes BLEED from staring at the screen. lol I've enjoyed your writing immensely, and I'm looking forward to how you end this, but I also think you've got a lot of options for sequels, and I'm willing to read anything you've written at least once. I think I'm gone back and reread this one at least three times, as well as your other stories. If I make you cheesecake and bonbons every day, will you live with me so I can read your stories faster? :) I'll even throw in homemade bread, but that's my best offer!
| Title: Chapter 35
| 26 Sep 2007 4:48 pm
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| Reviewer: trifectamom (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter as usual. This is my favorite WIP and I get so excited when I see it's been updated. I would love, love, love to read a sequel.
Awww! He's home! *Smiling* This chapter was so fulfilling for everything it included -- and quite a lot -- without being overly rushed or thrown in awkwardly. I loved Severus's explamation at being called Sev, but how he told Harry to come home early if he needed it :D And that Harry finally felt relaxed around Remus and that he got those letters -- Poor Ron and Hermione. They'll be in for the shock of their lives if and when they find out what happened.
thanks for your update
your fan fiction is great
hope to read the next chapter soon
| Title: Chapter 35
| 26 Sep 2007 9:30 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Great story. Very emotional and moving. I'm glad Dumbledore got what was coming to him from Harry. I hope you have no more trauma for poor Harry! I appreciated the non-descriptive rape and torture scene. You got the meaning across without graphic violence (unlike the later chapters) you might need to change your upfront description if you are going to include any more memories as I started this story not in the mood to read graphic scenes. Harry's emotional and physical problems are enough and you bring them out beautifully. Snapes gradual change is fabulous work and I love their verbal sparring.
| Title: Chapter 35
| 26 Sep 2007 9:07 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Sequels are always an excellent idea if they are written by you XD *hears cries of "suck up" in the distance*
Please tell me you don't have something diabolical planned for his "homecoming" just now... maybe I'm getting too used to reading between lines in cliffies, but seriously yo, that would be cruel. :)
Love what you're doing though:)
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