| Title: Chapter 35
| 26 Sep 2007 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: latoya_snape (Anonymous)
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yes yes yes pls write a sequel i think it would be great idea
| Title: Chapter 23
| 26 Sep 2007 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous)
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Good chapter! I really like the ending when Harry called the dungeon quarters home. It's about time he had a place to call that! I hope you can consider writing a sequel! It would be really nice to find out what happens as the year goes on and maybe eventually add in a confrontation between Harry and Voldemort to spice things up!
| Title: Chapter 35
| 26 Sep 2007 7:49 am
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| Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous)
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I would like to think that the death nibblers wouldn't mistreat Harry too badly, but really, the school year would probably be horrible. It would make a good sequel.
Very sweet. Home. :) I love it.
| Title: Chapter 35
| 26 Sep 2007 7:15 am
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| Reviewer: Neverlandite (Anonymous)
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Sequel? Yes please. I adore this story (and your others as well ^_^)
I don't reveiw often, but I felt like it was about time.
| Title: Chapter 34
| 24 Sep 2007 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love when Harry goes, "But he didn't ever fight for me, not like you did." Great, great work. Thank you for posting this!
You are made of awesomness as well! This was a lovely addition to your story!
I've always loved the journal entries and this one takes the cake, for it is soo Harry that it's amazing! It's great to see what he feels about the stuff that's going on in his life while still being within the scope of characterization that J.K. set the perameters for. Snape in this chapter also gave me goosebumps, and it's so sweet how he's confused and unsure of his feelings but knows that he cares about Harry. I'm also glad to hear that Dumbledore has made a good recovery and that holds no ill will towards Harry. I just hope that Harry's able to at least try to attend classes--perhaps potions will be the first on his schedual...Can't wait for the next chapter!
I love this story. Everything about it, the humor, especially.
This line was great:
"Thank you, Harry," Snape said, and Harry goggled at him. A ‘thank you' and his first name? In the same sentence? They must be having a snowball fight in the seventh layer of hell about now.
**I had to laugh at that one.
I think it'd be really interesting to see a dueling session between Harry and Snape.
Also, the whole scene at the end where Snape replaced the book Harry had gotten from Sirius was subtle...and perfect...and I just wanted to hug my laptop screen.
I'm so excited to see what you've got in store for the next chapter :)
Wow these last chapters were a bit intense! I'm kinda glad Harry let Dumbledore feel all his pain. The meddling old man really needed a wake up call on the truth about Harry's life and that certainly did it for him. Keep up the wonderful work!!
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