| Title: Snape's Pensieve
| 25 Sep 2007 7:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Fantastic story that is so not cannon! Yah! I hope Harry stays with Sev and Sirius and doesn't go back. Hope you update this interesting and unusual story soon.
Good chapter! I don't really know about Lily appearing in this story though. Was it ever explained what happened to her in the first place? Keep up the great writing!
| Title: Snape's Pensieve
| 23 Sep 2007 2:47 am
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| Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous)
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I just read this story and I have to tell you that you're awesome :). It's so clever and original. I really like Sirius, Harry, and the two Snapes, and their various dynamics. I'm really interested to see what happens. As for Lily, I think her suddenly appearing would be rather strange. What you have here with these particular characters is special and unique, so I think it would be best to explore what you have already instead of bringing in a new angle.
| Title: Snape's Pensieve
| 22 Sep 2007 4:00 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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UPDATE, damn it, UPDATE! How many freakin' times am I gonna have to repeat the word UPDATE????
I love this so much! My heart is bouncing in my throat. I NEED to know what happens to Sev and Harry. Please, Please, ::I'm beggin with everything I've got:: UPDATE really, REALLY, soon.
Your loyal, but tormented, reviewer,
Lady Julie Snape.
| Title: Introduction
| 21 Sep 2007 11:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Has great potential. Please, PLEASE update soon!
| Title: Snape's Pensieve
| 20 Sep 2007 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: anon. (Anonymous)
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The story keeps getting better & better!
I am not keen on the idea of having Lily in the story. I really like seeing interaction between Snape and Harry, and bringing in Lily would weaken that. If you bring in Lily, please consider waiting until after you've developed a sturdy relationship between Severus & Harry.
The story is great! Keep it up! =c)
good chapter! OMG, the suspense!!!!!
| Title: Snape's Pensieve
| 19 Sep 2007 10:14 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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Isn't Lily dead? I thought you already said she was back in the beginning. That'd be an interesting twist, if she turned out NOT to be dead, though. Either way, I'm anxious to see what it was that caused it all to begin :)
Keira
Another excellent chapter. I'm not sure Lily would add to the story, really. The relationship between the three guys is pretty cool in your story. The possibilities with the old Harry and old Snape in the new setting with Sirius are wonderful. Of course, with Harry having found the paper now, I'm not sure any longer that that's where you're going with it. In any case, I like it how it is.
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