That was a great chapter, I really like the story it's turning out to be great. I hope that Harry decides to let Severus be his Dad in both realities, as soon as they get the right Snapes in their rightful places. Keep up the awesome work, and please update again soon. LES
I think having the improved Severus and this Harry in the universe we know...and leaving bitter Severus with an exculpated cheery Sirius as a roomate and Mrs. Hammond dropping by all the time... would be wonderful justice! Lily is gone to the next great adventure with James, I say leave her there. In both realities she died with him so she is better left dead. Severus will have enough to cope with when the Dark Lord returns.
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| 14 Sep 2007 4:37 pm
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| Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous)
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great story pls update soon
So now the two Severus' are sharing recollections and Harry is getting ready to share Sirius' memories. I really don't know how you are going to work things out, but I give you points for creativity.
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| 13 Sep 2007 1:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous)
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The ending is good. Had I been Harry I would have wanted to have the other Harry's memories too, so as to not become confused when meeting new people, etc. Please continue to write this story. I want to find out what happens next.
Best regards,
Jonathan
Interesting, interesting. I like that both Snapes had the same "dream" and that no one seems to know that this-Harry had died. Probably a good thing too, as I was seriously starting to question Sirius's sanity for taking him into town...
Good chapter!
I'm very curious to see which Snape gets sent to the reality Harry is in so I hope you can write more soon!
Holy crap...two Snapes--face to face. lol. Actually this chapter wasn't boring at all. I really liked it. Can't wait for the next one :)
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