| Title: Missing
| 09 Sep 2007 10:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous)
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This chapter is not boring. It adds an interesting new twist to this story. Please continue as soon as possible. I want to find out which Severus is send back to Harry's current reality and whether Harry ever gets back.
Best regards,
Jonathan
Interesting. I like that Snape got thrown back into the other reality - it adds a new element to the story. Though I'm positive of the outcome, the way in which they'll reach that point is still beyond me. I look forward to more updates :)
Yeah not much happened in this one, but you did have to set up the situation for the next chapters to follow.
WOW! I did NOT see that coming! Holy cow! WHoooo!!!! And just which Severus will end up going back? Wow, what a mess! Fantastic!
Thank you for the update this chapter was intresting curious to see what happens next. This entire chapter seemed to be a cliffhanger in itself. Keep up the great work, and please update again soon. LES
Oh, wonderful plot twist! Really great. I was not expecting that at all. Someone is mucking around with Severus and Harry, aren't they? My money is on Dumbledore, but I can't for the life of me figure out how having the two trade lives will help.
Ahh, c'mon! You can't leave it there. That's completely unfair. This is going to bother me until we get some darned answers here! Lol. I do hope you are able to update soon. However...
In the meantime, I must say that I'm enjoying seeing Sirius as happy and spontaneous as he is. That's the Sirius I've always wanted to see, and it's good to view it in such a way. The story still does have that dampened, dragging sense, though - due to the fact that Harry may or may not be a permanent fixture in this dimension, and it's ever present. So good job on that!
Where could Severus be? Hrmm I suppose that'll be answered next time!
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