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Reviews For To Have a Father
Title: Black 29 Aug 2007 2:15 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah it is Sirius, now they just have to convince him to stay.
Title: Black 29 Aug 2007 11:31 am
Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello just dropping a note to say I have been reading your story and I find it interesting. Please continue to update as soon as possible. Thanks for writing the story!

    Best regards,
    Jonathan
Title: Black 29 Aug 2007 9:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. So Sirius came, and met Harry. I saw all the questions he asked and I couldn't help but wonder if he was trying to set Harry up. If he was trying to make him see that it was better if he stayed here. He doesn't have a family that miss him in the other reality, and he's got friends in both.

    I liked the memory they shared about Harry and his broom. I wonder if Snape was remembering roasting marshmallows with his son before when Harry brought up wanting to do that.

    Great chapter! Thank you for updating!
Title: Black 29 Aug 2007 5:25 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    hmm... i think if i was harry, i would probably point out that he's a different person than the son Sev lost and it's not fair to harry that it seems like they only care because he LOOKS like the other Harry. I just keep thinking that Harry's feelings will end up getting hurt if he gets attached because he'll feel like it's not really him that they want and they are just using him as a stand in... a substitute instead of caring for him because of who he is.
Title: Black 29 Aug 2007 5:13 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story I really can't wait for more.

    I have to say I am a little mad at that other Harry for getting himself killed. WHY in this world would he go after the Stone when his father was at the school. MAKING Severus and Sirius unhappy like that.
Title: Black 29 Aug 2007 4:54 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    An update! Hooray! I'm really loving this story. It makes me all giddy and happy. I really can't wait for the day Harry takes his head out of his *cough* and realizes what he'd be leaving behind if he went back - and what a tragically sick existance he'd be going back to.

    Can't wait for more :D
Title: Guests 26 Aug 2007 8:43 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dude. You're killing me here. Is it Sirius?

    Man, it's hard to envision a world in which Harry doesn't know who Sirius is - I know he's only 13...12, whatever, but still. It'd be THAT much more special if he was seeing Sirius "ressurected" from the dead.

    Anyway, this story is extremely well written. I'm so thrilled I decided to read it tonight. I love the concept, though, I must admit I would have assumed ...*this*-Harry to still be alive - but I almost like it this way better. Adds another dimension to the tension and gut-wrenching sorrow they're both feeling at the moment. I really really like it.

    Please update again soon. I'm adding you to my favorites list. This story is incredible :D

    Keira
Title: Guests 25 Aug 2007 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Agh! No 0_0 who dat???? I'm really getting into this story now. I'm so torn between what I think I want Harry to do about leaving or staying to! >_< ugh. . .

    Sevy here is so nice. . . but Sirius back home is lonely and sad. . . but Sevy is lonely and sad too. . . but the Basilisk is already dead back 'home' will he be able to defeat it again??? Right! That's it! I'm sitting here and not moving until he makes his mind up! *Pitches tent*
Title: Guests 25 Aug 2007 4:43 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice cliff-hanger!
Title: Parlance 25 Aug 2007 4:32 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

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