| Title: Guests
| 26 Jun 2019 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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They have a lovely relationship already thank you
| Title: Parlance
| 26 Jun 2019 7:35 pm
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Thank you I love the similarities of this Severus and cannon ones
| Title: Answers
| 26 Jun 2019 7:30 pm
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| Title: Introduction
| 26 Jun 2019 7:22 pm
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Thank you a most unusual and dramatic start to a story!
I can not believe someone so young wrote this great story. I thought you did a terrific job.
I thought you did a very good job with Snape's character. A lot of authors have a hard time writing his speech and action nuances and I thought you did really well here. Harry was good but a bit mature. Sirius was charming as well as the world you created in the little town they lived in.
Your premise gets an A++ for originality. This story could've gone in another direction as well. Harry could've gone back to his reality with the knowledge of what he knows (and Snape as well since he was there too) and build a relationship with Snape in his reality. Or - plot twist - Harry learns he is actually Snape's son in his reality because similar events happened except for Snape/Lily's marriage and that Snape knew Lily was carrying his child. Ah well. :)
Thanks for writing! I hope you continued to develop your skills over the years because you are a talented writer!
| Title: Siriet
| 10 Jan 2014 11:19 am
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| Reviewer: Anthezar (Anonymous)
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I died. Holy crap, I died. This chapter... HILARIOUS. Bytheway, my previous review got cut off for done reason. Anyhoo, brilliant chapter. I need a picture, too. XD
I love this story. It's amazing.
i loved it really did touching n comical at the same time!! plz do write that sequel im dying 2 read more!
*applauds* Well done! Such an excellent fic - I really enjoyed this from start to finish. I was so sure Harry would have to go back to his own reality for a bit there!
Thank you for sharing such a brilliant story - I'll definitely be reading the sequel.
Your characters are a bit to OC, but they are all brilliantly done, and the story is unique in its own way. Good Job.Hopefully the sequal will be just as good and unique.
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