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Title: Chapter 43 11 Aug 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwwww of course Snape would be in the mirror! Another great chapter! I really like the way Severus and Harry are spending so much quality time together, and the contrasts between cannon Harry in terms of his reaction to the mirror and the way Snape teaches him. Greattt stuff!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2 10 Aug 2008 6:49 pm
Reviewer: vampluver (Signed) [Report This]
    is this story also on fanfiction.net? seems like i've read it before

    Author's Response: Yes, it is.  I update both places (here and there) at the same time.
Title: Chapter 43 09 Aug 2008 8:03 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    That ending was so heartbreaking! The way you went about Harry’s discovery of the mirror and combination of the section from the book with your twists really flowed nicely together. Hopefully, this will be another step towards Harry and Ron becoming friends. I sure hope so, it totally crushed Harry when Ron was against him and I’d like them to be buds.

    I really like the times Harry spends with Sev, Harry can feel like he’s part of a family. I thought it was really great when Sev showed Harry his mom's sketch and how Harry made another one for Snape. It’s nice that Harry has a connection with his mom other then his eyes, too.

    Please post again when you can!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I figured, with Snape and Harry acting more friendly than in the books, it only made sense for Snape to share memories of Lily with her son, and giving him that connection he was so lacking before.  And yes, Ron and Harry will be . . . more civil to each other after this.

    Thanks again, for your review!

Title: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008 10:05 pm
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, oh, oh! I can't believe it but you made the Mirror of Erised even more heartbreaking than in the books.

    Wonderful job so far! I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next (and I'm so excited that Ron and Harry are at least civil to each other in the end of this chapter).
Title: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Sniff, oh that is so sweet!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008 2:15 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely way to depict The Mirror of Erised: including Severus.
    I also like the natural way Harry and Ron seem to be starting to become friends.
    Well done, well enjoyed, well appreciated!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I am trying to make Harry and Ron be more civil, at least.  We'll see how it works out.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 8:36 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just thinking about this story the other day. (Wondering when there might be an update.;-)
    Keep writing! Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Well, updates are a little slower than they used to be, but not too far between.  :-)  Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 7:54 pm
Reviewer: kjpotter (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh that last scene just made my heart ache. So sweet. Poor kid...

    Author's Response: Yeah, a bittersweet ending, to be sure.  But there'll be more fun ahead!  Thank you for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry and Ron are at least somewhat getting along.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 7:14 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! It was an interesting Occlumency lesson, and it was really very nice of Severus to show Harry the drawing his mother had done. That meant so much to Harry, and what meant even more was when Severus let him know how much he valued Harry's own drawing.

    I'm glad to see Ron beginning to come around. I like Harry's Slytherin friends a lot, but I like Ron and Hermione too, and it's good for him to have friends in both Houses.

    I felt so sad for Harry when he saw his family in the Mirror of Erised. That's always been one of the most poignant scenes in the whole saga to me, and I really like how you added the extended family and not only his parents. And Severus, too, with him and James apparently getting along. I love how Harry is considering Severus as part of his family, and it's a nice counterpoint to the fact that Severus also feels paternal towards Harry. But hopefully, Harry can have Severus as a parent figure in this universe.

    Fantastic job as always!

    Author's Response: Harry seeing his extended family in the mirror of Erised is in the original, actually.  I took the description from the book almost whole cloth.  But the bit about Severus, obviously that was me.  :-)  Ron and he will certainly be more civil after this experience, and yes, it's good for Harry to have friends in both (maybe even all) Houses.  That's what the Hat says, anyway, lol.  THank you for reviewing, Kristeh, as always.

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