Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 7:06 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter; you did a great job of showing how Harry really desperately wanted his parents to be real, to be there, and for Snape to be a part of it too.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  It seemed very natural to add Snape in to the picture Harry desired, of a real family who wanted him.  We'll see what we can do about making that real.
Title: Chapter 23 07 Aug 2008 7:04 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's rage and fury finally bursting out, his house-mates' concern for him ALL triggering Severus' realization--FINALLY!--make this one of your best chapters ever. Great job.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 6:31 am
Reviewer: skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awwwww.... *hugs harry*

    brilliant chap! i like these occlumency lessons MUCH better.

    Author's Response: The lessons certainly are easier on Harry this way!  Thanks for reviewing, skrewt!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 6:14 am
Reviewer: Cicci Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, i loved the mirror scene, how Snape just appeared and fit right in. Beautiful.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  That seemed natural to me, that Harry would desire such an outcome.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Aug 2008 2:34 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story, and how carefully it is integrated into canon, yet has a witty take all its own.

    Author's Response: THank you!
Title: Chapter 42 23 Jul 2008 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Man! Harry is going to get it!
Title: Chapter 42 22 Jul 2008 4:31 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Woops! Didn't notice this chapter, hehe. Well, looks like I got my wish about the next chapter being posted soon! lol.

    Anyway, this chapter was very intense in the beginning. I didn't realize Harry had made an oath until the Barron said so, that was a shock. As I said, very intense scene. Poor Snape didn’t take the news well.

    Occlumency went rather... interesting, lol. Poor Harry is in trouble now! I bet he really wishes he had told the truth now. I’ll be keeping my eyes open for your next update!

    Author's Response: Thanks, snarky Beth!  I should have a new chapter in a week or so.
Title: Chapter 41 22 Jul 2008 4:11 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Super sorry for the late review! Just found time to stop back on the site the other day, I've been real busy lately, and decided to check for updates.

    This chapter was fun, Harry really enjoyed his Christmas and had lots of surprises. I really hope someday Harry and Ron will become friends (that fight really sucked), it would be truly great, less tension (and I like Ron).

    That last scene was intense! Harry sure got some more inspiration to study Occlumacy. I'm very curious about how the lessons will go down as well as the run-in with the mirror, so I hope to see the next chapter soon :).
Title: Chapter 42 19 Jul 2008 5:53 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, Snape can't possibly be mad at him for saving Hermione! Though, I guess it is in his nature to be disappointed that Harry lied... Eek, I can't wait for the next chapter :D You have a way of holding me steadfast to your writing and I can't get enough.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Snape's cheesed about being lied to, but then, Harry's already been punished for that once, and for the incident as a whole.  Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 42 19 Jul 2008 5:07 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    The correct verb in your sentence, "Either by enslaving the boy or by leeching the magic from his core" should be LEACHING, not "leeching". It's a process of extraction, not bleeding something out.

    Wonderful, wonderful story. You are one of the handful of authors who are able to maintain the canon feel of the HP characters. I love your work, am extremely glad you updated, and look forward to more! (Soon, if possible!, hint hint!)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  I'm not sure of the verb correction, honestly -- I was going for a verb that meant Voldie would act like a leech and suck the magic out of Harry.  But leaching works, too.  Hmm.  I hope to have another chapter done soon, but right now I'm working on one for "Before the Dawn."

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