Beautiful chapter! I love the trust that is building between Severus and Harry!
| Title: Chapter 38
| 26 Feb 2008 3:50 pm
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| Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous)
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I really like this story, you don't get overly mushy or snarky, and you have allowed each character to evolve as this great story has progressed. Please keep writing.
How sad that neither the child of eleven nor the child of 31 are "fooled by the Headmaster's grandfatherly manner."
Although no one had been watching out for Harry before, I know that will not be the case now. An unbreakable vow Severus? Good for you.
I am so glad that Harry is opening up and telling another what his life had been like with the Dursleys.
| Title: Chapter 38
| 26 Feb 2008 12:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Ooooh!!! I loved the chapter and I really need those Harry Hugs as well as Snapey Hugs as I am feeling poorly. But your update sure cheered me some. Continue writing those brilliant chapters and one of these days, I am going to give you my mum's homemade pizza!
Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 37
| 16 Feb 2008 12:23 pm
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| Reviewer: dannymax (Anonymous)
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your writing is brilliant i hope you continue this story and whelp, the harry potter universe seems to be full of great WIPs that are never finished
I haven't visited the site in a while, too buisy, but I finally got to read some updates so here is your reveiw:
Poor, poor sweet Harry! At least it didn't get that far, thank the Lord. So glad Gais is gone and that Harry can feel like he can confide in Snape, Harry really needs him. Peeves ruled what he did to Gais! Snape was truly wonderful. AW! SNape smiled! *fangirl squel* lol, at least I'm not crazily obsesive, I just love Snape with all my heart ^_^. That was a very good way to end the chapter, major props to you. PLEASE post again soon! PLEASE!
| Title: Chapter 22
| 07 Feb 2008 5:54 am
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| Reviewer: Joey Dallesandro (Anonymous)
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Nice interaction between Flint and Snape and *excellent* characterization of Flint, as well. Plus, Severus's epiphany, well, this was a chapter among chapters.
Great idea making the Bloody Baron into the sardonic, wry, bleak sense of humor ghost that he is.
Man, you're pumping these out! Yay! And you're feeding into our needs, and very well I might add. All this hurt/comfort business is fantastic. I'm glad Gaius is gone so fast and that Dumbledore has considered letting Snape take full or temporary custody of Harry. Woooh!
Absolutly amazing! You captured the emotions so well! I love sensitive issues like this, and this chapter was just what I love!
Keep Writing!
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