| Title: Chapter 23
| 23 Oct 2007 11:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Why is Harry still alive??? Just kidding. Personally, I would have given up with the thinking going on in his head. I'm glad the Slytherin's can organize behind their classmate. Don't let Harry give in too soon with Snape. Then again, if Snape is rejected, he might just give up too. What a mess. And Harry has done nothing to warrant what his life has turned into. Very angsty chappie. I don't feel sorry for Snape at all. When you said Harry was in the Hospital last chapter, you didn't tell us it was because he was trying to kill himself!!!
Wow I didn't realize Harry had such a, for lack of better word, potty mouth. Must have heard it from his uncle? Good chapter and I am very glad Snape finally apologized! What a git he has been lately! But all should (hopefully) be well now! :D
* weeping *
How much is the boy supposed to be able to take?
Author's Response: Hi Banner, thanks for the review! As for your question, tho' I know it's probably rhetorical, I figured I'd answer anyway, to say, we'll see about how much he can take next chapter (which I'm working on now) where the meltdown will be shown from Harry's perspective, as well as a summary of the horrible days (for him) leading up to it. I hope it'll give more context for the inevitable meeting between him and Severus. Thanks again!
| Title: Chapter 22
| 22 Oct 2007 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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IT'S ABOUT TIME SNAPE WISED UP!!! And about work, sorry.
Haha, poor you. Having to work. It must blow big time when you're not used to it... it'll blow for us at least ;)
Can I say it's about damn time that this happened? Good grief, Harry's a tough kid. I have to admire the way you write him so believably... and it was only a matter of time before he had a severe break down like that. The true test will be to see if Severus can move past what he's done and rectify the whole dang thing. I can't WAIT for that to happen either :D
Good luck with work and your writing!
I'm glad that Severus has finally been shaken up! It's high time he started helping Harry, instead of tormenting him. I loved how the Bloody Baron took up for Harry, and McGonagall, too. Looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully, everything will go well at your work!
| Title: Chapter 22
| 20 Oct 2007 11:07 am
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| Reviewer: Mayqueen (Anonymous)
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All good fanfiction writers should be subsidized by earnest and ardent fans so that they can abandon their day jobs, and dedicate themselves to updating their brilliant fics... Unfortunately the world is cruel... I love all your stories.... and have been following them from the beginning and Better Be Slytherin is my favourite... Looking forward to further updates at your convenience
| Title: Chapter 22
| 20 Oct 2007 8:46 am
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| Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous)
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Oh man. I love this story so, so much. The personality of Harry is fantastic, and I just want to keep reading.
Excellent! He sees the light! Now perhaps things can get better for them both. Wonderful chapter!
| Title: Chapter 22
| 20 Oct 2007 12:30 am
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| Reviewer: mel (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see the interaction between Harry and Snape in the next chapter!! Damn those work related activities!!! I so look forward to reading your work!! All of it. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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