I'm glad the Bloody Baron stopped Snape from making another mistake with Harry. I want him to go back to his thinking about taking charge of Harry. I want to see where that goes and how he does it and and and... Love it!
Ha!! Did Severus really think that detention would be more important that Quidditch?! Not bloody likely - there'll always be more detentions (especially for Harry it seems!) but Quidditch - and the chance to increase his standing with his fellow Slytherins - is paramount to Harry, and rightly so!!
I hope Severus realizes that these constant detentions, while keeping Harry close and hopefully out of harm's way, won't help Harry integrate better with his study group and fellow Firsties!!
Terrific chapter - I look forward to the next one!!
Scarlett
Just as I finish reading all the missed updates you update again yay! Excellent chapter and as always I look forward to more! Keep up the wonderful writing...
Skittles to you
| Title: Chapter 19
| 06 Oct 2007 2:08 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Hope you're feeling better soon. Thanks for the update.
Glad you posted! Another good chapter. I like your Bloody Baron and your giving him a larger part in the story. He makes a good counterpart to Snape, especially since they're both Slytherins.
I'm glad you posted ( anything ), I was worry not to hear of your stories for such a time ( not so long, but unusual for you ;-) ) and I was readu to send you a message to ask if you were all right ;-)
Anyway, get better soon, and thanks for this chapter !
Sorry to hear you were under the weather. It certainly doesn't show in this chapter; it's exceptional as usual.
Harry sure is a cheeky little thing, isn't he? I would rather see that, though, than to see him too meek. I'm glad that Snape is able to see through him, though, and can see that underneath it all he is a pretty insecure and scared child.
I've never read a story where the Bloody Baron has a substantial part, but I'm really enjoying it. He's very Slytherin, but at the same time he's rather caring and thoughtful. Very funny. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. I hope RL treats you better. Thanks and take care....
Good chapter! I surely hope Harry changes his mind and decides to tell Snape he has Quidditch practice or else Snape just might storm out on the feild and bust him. Keep up the excellent writing!
*Mouth watering*
Little Harry sure has a mouth on him! Haha. I loved that he kept swearing and the Bloody Baron didn't mind. And, am I sensing a Hermione/Ron thing between Millie and Teddy? That'd be pretty fun, actually.
I like the concept of Harry's scar appearing to be inflamed or freshly cut when he has his pains -- I never got that impression from the books, but I like it for your story. It works well :)
Looking forward to more :D
Wow...I didn't realize how hungry I was until I read your review similes. lol.
This was a great chapter! Snape won't mind, eh, Harry? lol. Yeah, right.
Can't wait for the next chapter :0
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