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Title: Chapter 18 29 Sep 2007 3:13 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the way you handled the visit to the Dursleys. You avoided the typical scenarios and still came away with Snape knowing a good deal of what Harry's life was like, leaving behind a nasty little jinx, and yet no permanent damage. I'm looking forward to seeing how this affects Snape's interaction with Harry. One thing good about this story is that even though Snape finds out more and more about Harry, he doesn't become particularly sympathetic, at least not overtly. And Harry hasn't lost either his spirit or his temper and is quite ready to defy Snape on occasion. This is more like canon Harry and makes for great interchanges between the two.
Title: Chapter 18 29 Sep 2007 1:43 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    "Something flung open the door at that moment, and he stared into the soft, pudgy face of a giant slug . . . with arms."

    **I laughed quite hard at this line. I don't think Dudley has ever been described like this, has he? It was perfect.

    Nice chapter! I like how the Baron is becoming increasingly protective of Harry. I'm starting to really love that ghost. You're doing a really great job of keeping Snape in character and of showing how he does have a temper but is able to reel it back in when he needs to.

    I'm looking forward to the discussion with Dumbledore!
Title: Chapter 18 29 Sep 2007 1:14 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter!! That was a lovely visit to the Dursley household. Harry will be horrified that Snape knows of everything that went on in that household. Keep up the awesome writing!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 6:58 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Both Slytherin! and Whelp will be dealing with the Parseltongue issue, huh? Awesome!

    Anyway, wow. What a chapter. There was so much in it! It was a nice change of pace, that's for sure. I mean, I love it no matter what, but it was refreshing to get something so "jam-packed". Now I can't wait to see what Snape learns this next chapter - there's a heck of a lot there, man. Lol. Yay for Snape and his Legilimency!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 4:02 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry kicked Snape out of his mind!!! OMG!! Go Harry - I think that Snape won't have any trouble teaching Occlumency to Harry!! And Harry and Draco are both on the team - a banner day for Harry all around!!!

    I'm curious to learn what Zabini's problem is, whether it's just jealousy or something darker - and who did give Harry the chocolate frogs and if they mean to help or harm him?!

    Fantastic chapter - you're really setting things up here, and it's leaving me on the edge of my seat in anticipation!!
    Scarlett
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 2:53 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh! I can't wait until the weekend!

    I hope that the box of chocolate frogs were from Ron, Neville, and the like. I just don't know how you would explain that!

    Really good characterization of Harry after Snape sees his memories, although it's kinda hard to remember that Harry's only 11 years old here. But that's ok too, because he has grown up more due to those experiences at the Dursleys.

    Is Teddy a half-blood or muggle born? He certainly acts like it with his sticking up for Harry and defending of the Gryffindors and such. Or, is it that he's one of Harry's attackers? I hope that's not it. But I can't wait for when we do find out who they are!

    Great chapter! I especially love how Snape is becoming more mentor-like with Harry, it shows that he is getting over his bias from James. That's good!!

    Again, Can't Wait For The Weekend!!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 2:34 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Snape is sneaky! Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 1:13 am
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus will meet the Dursley's, that should be fun!

    Update soon! Great chapter.
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 12:57 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it. LOVED IT! Good old Draco...always getting what he wants..lol. I'm dying for the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 17 27 Sep 2007 12:20 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no Severus better be careful or he's going to destroy Harry's trust, but I do see the his point of seeing the memories because of his "meeting" with the Dursleys. Looking forward to their continued conversation and the next chapter. LES

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