GOod chapter! I'm still really looking forward to reading about Snape visiting the Dursley's so pretty pretty please write that scene soon!
Hehe. Cheeky brat. Classic Snape! And OUTLOUD at that! Ah, I love your Snapes so much. They're P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Precise amount of snideness and intelligence.
I liked the idea of Snape using Legimency on Harry like that. Poor kid - I can't imagine most kids experience that. But he's tough and took it like a champ :) Gotta love that boy.
A different sort of chapter. I really enjoyed seeing the memory work. Also, Snape's reactions to the varying possibilities surrounding Harry's memories of the incident are interesting and revealing of his internal fears and stresses. I like the way you're having the two progress together.
I loved it.
I've got a headache, so I could really sympathize with the razor-blade pain Harry was feeling in his brain. lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
"Right," Harry said, blanking his expression and making sure his voice held no trace of the deep annoyance he felt. "That sounds very reasonable."
"You are extraordinarily impertinent."
"Yes, sir."
**I loved that part. It was as if Harry was saying...yeah, I know I am...can we get on with this? lol
This was a great chapter. You're doing a really nice job of keeping up the suspense and developing a plot. I can't wait for the next update :)
These last couple of chapters have been excellent! I'm curious to find out if Snape will enter Harry's mind and what all he might see. Hope you can update again soon!
Aww. Ron isn't FAIR.He shouldn't judje a book by it's cover or a wizard by his house! I love it all the same. it's a shame 'bout Harry's shyness and i'm glad he made friends.
I really like the back story and the Bloody Baron's explanation about what had happened to Harry. So looking forward to Severus' "talk" with the Dursleys. Keep up the awesome work, looking forward to the next chapter. LES
| Title: Chapter 15
| 22 Sep 2007 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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The story is going great! Love this Snape and can't wait to see the confrontation with the Dursleys'.
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