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Title: Chapter 15 22 Sep 2007 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    And still no trip to the Dursleys! You're killing me here ;)

    I actually really enjoyed this chapter, and the light, but not mean, banter that went on between Harry and Snape. I liked seeing Snape being the adult in Harry's life, even if it is just as Head of House - in the way that he let Harry know what was expected of him and that it was the adults job to figure out how to deal with the culprit.

    Looking forward to more :)
Title: Chapter 15 22 Sep 2007 6:14 am
Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry is so awesome in this chapter. I love him when he's so feisty and trying to figure things out. He really seemed like the canon book 1 Harry.
Title: Chapter 15 22 Sep 2007 2:45 am
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry!
Title: Chapter 15 22 Sep 2007 2:04 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Harry is quite competent and self-possessed in this story even if the Dursleys have been horrible. And I still really love your Bloody Baron.
Title: Chapter 15 22 Sep 2007 12:02 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Bloody Baron!! I'm glad that Harry is gathering allies, even ghostly ones, as I'm afraid he's going to need all the help he can get just to stay alive!!

    Oooh!! I'm a little afraid of what Professor Snape will find if he's sifting through Harry's brain, and I hope it doesn't hurt Harry too much when he's doing it!!

    Terrific Chapter!!
    Scarlett
Title: Chapter 14 21 Sep 2007 6:14 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes!! I am soooo glad that Severus has reassured Harry that he won't be the one to pay (for once!) if (when) the Dursleys turn nasty!!

    And now Severus can see the problems Harry's been having, and I'm hoping he's going to do something about them!!

    I love your Harry - he's such a brave little guy, he's been through so much but he's still trying to do the best he can!!

    Thanks for a terrific chapter!!
    Scarlett
Title: Chapter 14 21 Sep 2007 4:34 am
Reviewer: earthsprite (Signed) [Report This]
    ooo yay!! can't wait for the next chapter :D wonderful job with this chapter. love how snape is slowly softening to harry.
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 8:49 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    What you are doing with the Bloody Baron is so unique! I sure can't imagine Nearly Headless Nick being willing to fight Voldemort for Harry. Good thing he's in Sytherin.

    I also appreciated how Snape helped Harry to realize that Hogwarts was different from home and that he will protect him.
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Veritaserum used on Vernon Dursley....that's something I'd like to see. Well, maybe not...who knows what would come flying out of his mouth.

    The whole scene with the Baron was chilling...his flat tone... I'm still dying to know what is going on with Quirrell and the Baron and the night Harry was hurt.

    And this line was the absolute best. I wanted to cheer:

    He trailed off, sighed and looked away for a brief moment, then shook his head and decided the boy had suffered enough apathy on his part already. Enough equivocation. Time for him to admit some things, too. "Besides, I already believe you."


    Thanks for another great chapter. :)
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 3:14 pm
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooooh, the mystery continues. Very illuminating conversation between Snape and Harry, although Snape's conversation with the Baron was murky. Are all ghosts this vague about things, or is it just because he's muddled too? Looking forward to the next chapter.

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