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Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 7:53 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo!!! Great chapter! I really liked the exercise Harry had to do with the list of rules and rule breaking, and Snape's translation of why. I really also liked the part about the Baron. I did not expect that! Nice!

    I love, love Snape's thoughts. Fantastic job with them. Good development! yay!
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 7:52 am
Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, *squee*. The Bloody Baron is so freakin' cool. I'm loving this plotline, and I liked how both the mystery and the Snape-Harry relationship were advanced. Awesomeness.
Title: Chapter 13 20 Sep 2007 7:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm... and the mystery deepens. I like Harry's new friends. It was so sweet tat Harry woke up and had candy. :)
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 7:20 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Great discussion between Snape and Harry. I particularly liked Snape's last line.
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 6:08 am
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    YES!!!! YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!!!!
    Now, Please, make it be true - and let Harry stay at Hogwarts, at least for the Winter and Spring Holidays?!
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 4:42 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Peeves is so busted XD
Title: Chapter 14 20 Sep 2007 3:43 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    By the weekend? Oh, c'mon! That's like... 3 days! ;) I can make it. I can hold out until then -- *takes a deep breath*

    The bit with the Bloody Baron took my by surprise - I KNOW it was Quirrel-Mort behind it all, but the Bloody Baron having posessed Harry wasn't something I'd thought of. I had considered the possibility that perhaps somehow Harry had accumulated a similar chest wound, but no where did I think it was the same one. Good golly, that one killed the Baron, didn't it? Man. Harry's one lucky kid!

    The ending of the chapter was touching - and I really appreciated that you didn't have Snape coddling him any. Snape may be feeling empathetic, and even sorry for Harry, but he'd never coddle -- at least not someone he didn't consider family, or rather his child. And in any case, it would take a while for him to get there still.

    I'm so so so excited to see what becomes of his trip to the Dursley's. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that it's either this next chapter or the one after. I'm nearly bursting, I want to read it so badly :D
Title: Chapter 13 18 Sep 2007 4:20 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Perhaps it was Quirrel... Hmm. I completely forgot about him. He hasn't been mentioned yet... well, briefly, but yeah. It'd be just like Quirrel-Mort to do that to poor Harry...

    I'm beginning to like Teddy and Millicent. Not so fond of the idea of her decking Hermione later on, but still I'm starting to like her :)
Title: Chapter 13 18 Sep 2007 4:10 am
Reviewer: akblake (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, sign me up for a Snape hug!! And snarks are fine; I snark back lol.

    You've got my curiosity piqued and I'm eagerly waiting to find out what's going on with the ghosts and Harry! Is Harry forming a version of the 'Gryffindor Trio' with Teddy and Millie?
Title: Chapter 13 18 Sep 2007 1:37 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I could use a hug from Snape right about now...LOL. The idea alone cheers me up.

    Okay, maybe I'm catching on late, but I'm starting to see the slight parallel between Millie and Teddy/Ron and Hermione. The personality traits are a bit inverted, but this was the first chapter where I saw the similarities. And I loved it. Am I way off?

    I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up your awesome, updating ways :)

    Author's Response:

    Am I way off?

    While I can not speak to generalized "off-ness", in this case, no you aren't.  Off, that is.  ;-)  Thanks for the review!


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